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U-NeeK_A Lil Sum Sum I Wrote Up

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A Lil Sum Sum i prepared just to post up and to Show that i am back and have Elevated

im cooler than an ice-block..my flow is unpredictable..
my boiz are killerz so keep your hating to a minimal..

With this dream team..we go to the mall and charge..
Im running a military of G's so call me Sarge..

my rhyming elvation..
is the oposite of constipation..

It Be Carelessly Flying out
..you be desperately crying out..

For you to be saved..
I thought you were a snitch...But my complexity iz whut u craved..


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Post by Brah-Vo »

FIrst of all, change the name. its not a keystyle lol. U wrote this ..
Second of all, this is okay, alot of elevation.
Makes me question if this is actually yours because u improved pretty fast.

With this dream team..we go to the mall and charge..
Im running a military of G's so call me Sarge..


^^ ur best bar ... The multi was straight, and it was a good simile.

Keep up.
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Post by Haz »

This Was Aiight.. it Was Sorta Basic..
If u Wanted to Show the People u Elevated Make it a Lil More Lyrical..
(Not Tryin To Be a Asshole) jus Sayin..

Stay Active in The Scriptures Though
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Post by UNeeK »

Thax man..Apreciate This..Btw It Iz Original..Seq Taught me how to multi

EEct...It wasnt as hard as i thought
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Well Deres ya First Mistake..
Seq's a Fag.. neva Have a Fag Teach U Anythin..
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Post by Brah-Vo »

^^^ Lol haz ... what if i said i help this youngin elevate too?
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True He did
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Post by MesaR »

multis are the greatest thing ever.. lol

and hazard i could teach you how to multi you know maybe even keystyle if your lucky

but as for this.. it was alright a little basic but your deff getting better. peace out.
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by Haz »

If i Wanted to Ova Use Multis & Fuck ya Whole Style up.. i Woulda Been Done it..
Ya Shit is Weak Ur Like a Complete Repeat Of Ekoms..
& Raiza Ur Assed Out Soo It wouldnt mattah ..
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Post by Brah-Vo »

sequence may be just all multies, but he's recently been uppin his punches. they gettin more creative everyday.
N is bein assed out a bad thing? Lmao


BTW u-neek, stay active. :)
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Wdf Are you his Cheerleader or Somethin???
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Post by Gutta »

shit was simple as fuck.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

No haz.
Fuck dude u reckon the whole world is against u.
Fuckin shut the fuck up.
No one has a problem with you but you seem to have a problem with everyone.
Fuckin grow a dick and act ur age u faggot.
It's called having friends, and i jus wanna support my friends. Fukn hell.
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Post by Momeijah »

SequencE wrote:multis are the greatest thing ever.. lol
Jesus Christ Kill Yourself Now.
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