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ExistenZ
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Step Up N Imma Concussion-Ya-Frame, Be Crushin'-Ya-Brain.
There Ain't No Rust-In-My-Game, Imma BLow Up Like Combustion-To-Flames.
Yall Can't Get Enough-Of-My-Name, So At The Top Imma Fuckin'-Remain.
When I Start-The-Beginin', I Lyrically Take The Heart-From-The-Livin'.
Rip You Apart N People Do What I Say Like A Martyr's-Opinion.
Imma Lyricall Storm I'll Burn You WIth The Heat-From-Earth,
When You Were Born God Said He SHoulda Took Your Speech-At-Birth.
Everytime You Speak-A-Verse, Everyone's Like "He's-The-Worst".
I Seem To Make My Words-Lord, Slash N Cut You Like Curved-Swords.
Leave Ya Fuckin' Nerves-Sore, Stay Up Top Where The Birds-Soar.
My Pen Is Like Dope In A Needle, Well You're Broken-N-Feeble,
I'll Start Chokin'-Ya-Breathe-Hole, You N A Mic Is Like The Pope-N-The-Evil.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this shit was pretty dope man, i liked the beginnin of it more than the rest but its was nice all the way thru
keep postin you have a lot of potential
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by MesaR »

yeah this was pretty straight, pretty nice multis too man punches were pretty decent too..
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Step Up N Imma Concussion-Ya-Frame, Be Crushin'-Ya-Brain.
There Ain't No Rust-In-My-Game, Imma BLow Up Like Combustion-To-Flames.
Yall Can't Get Enough-Of-My-Name, So At The Top Imma Fuckin'-Remain.
When I Start-The-Beginin', I Lyrically Take The Heart-From-The-Livin'.

^ Nice Multis Son.. Keep Droppin... Like Ghost sed u Got Potential.
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