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Audio verse.

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This is what Imma be recording. It'll be kinda hard to read just because I'm flowing how I do and without hearing it in audio first it'll be hard to see where the flow is for some people especially the way it's written. Hard to have structure when you just go. Soon as I get that mic I'll put it up as the song though.

Your hair flows down to your shouldas
Past your chest and almost to your hips
Salute when I walk by Ill be ya soldia
Cant stop starin in your eye n at ya lips
Beauty is in the eye of the beholda, and you're the epitome
Try to see what I do and dont try to be, whats a fallacy
Cause that aint you, and this is me, tryna to tell you dont change
Because perfect doesnt come closer is what Im tryna sing
Intellectually stunning, personality is runnin away with my heart
I cant even try to start, to stop from loving you is too hard
Dont listen to the assholes, believe in what ya head holds
Heartll lead the way to the perfect guy who wont lead to stray
You away from me the day I met I couldnt keep contained
My feelings that beats and stays with me from day to day
Dreams dont come true but it reassures when I pray
That youll woke up one moring an love me and say
That Im yours and theres no one else to give it to
But that cant happen, cause I do me, n you do you
There is no room for 3, no room for me in ya life
I want you to be my wife to be, but you cant see
That Im whats right, you picture a white horse
With a sword as a knight, but Im real as it gets
Do better? than try, but dont call me in bed as ya cry
Cuz you got slapped from ya man who aint right
I gave you a chance, to be with who could understand
Didnt take a glance, n your tears wet the earth n flood dry land
Hows it feel teh know your wrong, know Im gone, know this song
Is about you, is about us, is about what you couldnt see
About the future and what can not and never will be
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Your doin it To Dat Beat Huh.

ima Leave Feed once i Get Home Homie
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Haha yessir. Thats why I wanted that beat. REALLY easy to flow to this beat.
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Post by Arvincible »

idk if what i can say about this piece until I hear it in audio cuz like you sed i dont really know how it is flowed, it'll be interesting.

ill tell you whats up when you make your audio debut tho lol
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Yeah its hard. Audio bars are a lot different because you can just go and go and dont really need a structure.
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Intellectually stunning, personality is runnin away with my heart
I cant even try to start, to stop from loving you is too hard
Dont listen to the assholes, believe in what ya head holds
Heartll lead the way to the perfect guy who wont lead to stray
You away from me the day I met I couldnt keep contained
My feelings that beats and stays with me from day to day <------ i Liked this Part Da Most..

it Flows To Da Beat son.. ( Since i Do have Da Beat)..ima Be Waitin To Hear Dis Shit..
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