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tell the truth pt 2

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Who would of known, that under the dirt n the stone would lay the riches,
Chemicals make you awake wit itches, the night has come n ur Day is finished,
Follow a policy, fuck bush swallow some honesty, I set treason wit honor,
Im know one no reason to bother, u havent noticed that the seasons get hotter,
All politicians preachin religion, world power jus preyin n waitin seekin a victom,
Why aint any1 speakin to listen, we gotta get the message keep teachin the mission,
Their all professional liars, sayin they fight 4 our freedom, im settin congressional fires,
Tap the white house wit electrical wires, then tell you in these intellectual cyphers,
And whether you listen or not, the information is here im tryin to keep makin it clear,
I see a plague in the near, is it fact or fiction? But its Keepin the population in fear,
Government quarrels, turns to wars wit countries, we love the destruction of morals,
Weapons in construction til more fall, but were jus accustomed, its normal….
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by ExistenZ »

Damn That WOuld sound good with that song.. Shit was tight from start to finish.. Propz.
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thanx man
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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uppin
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Chemicals make you awake wit itches, the night has come n ur Day is finished, < Good line


All politicians preachin religion, world power jus preyin n waitin seekin a victom,
Why aint any1 speakin to listen, we gotta get the message keep teachin the mission,<< point came Across



And whether you listen or not, the information is here im tryin to keep makin it clear,
I see a plague in the near, is it fact or fiction? But its Keepin the population in fear,
Government quarrels, turns to wars wit countries, we love the destruction of morals,
Weapons in construction til more fall, but were jus accustomed, its normal…. <----- goood shit . each line..


Listen ghost.. you stayed on concept Man.. The pieces of this i Pointed out were what Stood out to Me the most & i Had to Give the Most Feed 2.. Waitin For 3.. keep Doin you
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx man appreciate the feed homie, i think pt 1 is better myself
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Brah-Vo »

And i thought part 1 was good.

Fuckin hell.
More deep shit, flowed well, multis was great, and your vocab was great.

What more can i say? A dope piece. A classic? Perhaps.

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Follow a policy, fuck bush swallow some honesty, I set treason wit honor,
Im know one no reason to bother, u havent noticed that the seasons get hotter,
All politicians preachin religion, world power jus preyin n waitin seekin a victom,
Why aint any1 speakin to listen, we gotta get the message keep teachin the mission,
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by thaphantom »

Damn homie i liked this whole thing...everything poppped out to me....that shit is so ill.....yo keep this shit up foreal homie
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