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Embed your soundclick video players with [soundclick]Song Id[/soundclick]. You can also just put [soundclick]Embed Code[/soundclick].

Please go back and fix as many of your old songs as you want.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

heres the song i said i wuz definetly recording,lyrics i posted here in scripz but there also on this link leave some feed plz and thanks

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6251763
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Post by 16 Micz »

its an ok track, i personally dont like your voice on this sounds a lil creepy pedophile-ish, but the story telling and lyrics were good, keep workin at it man.
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Post by Haz »

Dope Story/Lyrics <--- i Agree

u just Needah W!ork on your Delivery & get your voice fa Rappin its a Good Trac Dough
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

thanks 4 the feed so far yall
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Post by Omega Bill »

Aye this songs is real deep man. Love the lyrics, good story-telling. Like other said, only thing you realy need work on is your delivery. Get your delivery down, youll be even better.

Keep droppin.
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Post by Arvincible »

man i like the concept, and the lyrics but the way you laid the track down it was like southern-ish, i bet itll be pretty dope if you edit it up a little bit.
good shit though, im just tellin you how it sounds to me but ive never hit an audio track up heh
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

leavin feed since u asked me to, i like the concept of it, it needs super mixing done lol.. the lyrics r decent nothing outstanding but good enough, the way u did the hook was weird.. it was like.. ah...hahahahaha... i dunno it was weird as fuck.. more funny then depressing.. still... good concept n lyrics, u got the flow for it but its lacking alot of quality
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