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Raiza Sharpe & TGYH-Smokin Aces (Gun Fu)

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MesaR
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Post by MesaR »

alright, well JJ deff has more experience in these drops and overall, he knows what he really is talking about witch makes his bars go with the topic better even tho it's played as fuck, liked how u went off raiza's bars too

raiza, honestly bro i wasnt felling this verse dont think this style really suits you, overall it was an enjoyable to some degree..

5/10.
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Fill Ya Sternum With Slugs And Watch Ya Chest Dance
i'm Drivin Tha Lane Cuz My Personals Foul From A Refs Stance


it's A Fact Tha Gat'll Crack Ten i'll Let Tha Tech Dismantle Ya Flow
i'm Ready For Ya Ta Stop Spittin Game Cuz Ya Cant Handle Tha Hoz

Consider This Ya Lucky Day Cuz My Guns Are Clovers

Bars i enjoyed da Most from u

J you Deff came harda in Are Collab.. i wusnt Feelin raizas parts i Dunno seemed corny..

Strait Drop ova all
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Post by Cee4 »

this was pretty nice.
the topics more suited to TGYH as thats his style but Raiza u did alrite on here.
flow was perfect from TGYH and Raiza had a couple of choppy bits but i thought u both did well here.

i Play Tha Game Four Ways Cuz i Got 2 Double Barrels Pumpin Sparks
My Shots Deadly Like A Resperator They're Known Fa Jumpin Hearts
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Lmfao im cutt ..

Good Lookin on the feed. Upping.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nice multis, decent puns nothin superb but it was a decent read
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