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the mentality of reality is...

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Meditation is medication? Education is limitations to a higher elevation,
In the future a better nation? Fuck that shit, were doomed so Im never patient,
Try to show love instead of hatin? ha that would be fuckin up our reputations,
Finally the revelation, a black holes our destination, and is heaven waitin…?
Like nightmare said ima disappear, and so are ur families in an instant here,
Is it Clear? I don't know but its inchin here it could happen in this year,
or maybe around the time of 2009, ima major part of the minority,
You can find more in me, reality? Shit its my eyes that are torturing me,
Seein credence? The deceit in believing in jesus this greed has me envious,
Of any trust but only petty funds this currency is currently venomous,
Many trips to other countries called rendezvous jus to bomb they crews,
Sons, daughters but it's the moms that lose, sights seen in scenes, on that news,
Slaves disguised as soldiers, how did we as a people allow it to rise to this level,
Followin behind this devil, we feel worthless so we jus watch and decide to settle,
Wit the situation, poor liquidations holds our litigations in this nation, ignoranus..lol
Gov our entertainment, how shameless they act towards society during arraignment,
So I spark this, remain heartless, turnin tables, burin bridges like an arsenic,
Most of us are harmless, even though when we pass we jus tossed like garbage.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Haz »

In the future a better nation? Fuck that shit, were doomed so Im never patient,
Try to show love instead of hatin? ha that would be fuckin up our reputations,
Finally the revelation, a black holes our destination, and is heaven waitin…?


Slaves disguised as soldiers, how did we as a people allow it to rise to this level,
Followin behind this devil, we feel worthless so we jus watch and decide to settle


, So I spark this, remain heartless, turnin tables, burin bridges like an arsenic,
Most of us are harmless, even though when we pass we jus tossed like garbage.


Son.. LOL Dat Shit Wus iLLin.. Keep Droppin.. I See U Dont Get Alottah Feed..
i Got Chu wid Feed Dough..
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Probably one of the best pieces i've seen from ya ghost. Good drop.
Your vocab and rhyming capabilities are amazing, flow was on point and the topic was awesome.
Keep up my dude.
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Post by M.O.B »

that shit is ill
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Post by Glamtrash »

That shit's sick guy. Definitely one of the better ones i've read from you.

Many trips to other countries called rendezvous jus to bomb they crews,
Sons, daughters but it's the moms that lose, sights seen in scenes, on that news,
Slaves disguised as soldiers, how did we as a people allow it to rise to this level,
Followin behind this devil, we feel worthless so we jus watch and decide to settle,
^^
Nice.

Rock on.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

appreciate the feed yall, thanx

uppin the feed
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Post by complexity »

Yah. My favorite piece from you in a while.

Great vocab.
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Post by thaphantom »

This shit is ill yo you got mad talent...i like how u speak alot of political truth.....hmmmm check out the chill for the new post i'm bout to do....keep this shit up
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Post by Arvincible »

ignoranus..lol lmao wtf

naw dawg no hatin on ya at all, i actually havent seen you around here in a while. thought you died.
but im not angry or think everybody on me, im not sensitive like that, i just haven''t posted a diss on everyone in the scripture...i've been wanting to do it for a while to stir it up a little.


Gov our entertainment, how shameless they act towards society during arraignment,
So I spark this, remain heartless, turnin tables, burin bridges like an arsenic,
Most of us are harmless, even though when we pass we jus tossed like garbage.

the outro was the best part of it mang...good message. keep it up pro-bro
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for the feed everyone
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