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Haz
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here's Always A Little Girl Screamin in Tha Alley But Noones Ever Heard Her <-- yup


it's Known Pops Was Gone And Moms Was A Feind For Tha Pipe
They Ask What i'm Doin i Just Express Dreams When i Write <-- Deep nigga


Beefed With Tha Wrong Cats At School And i Ate Tha Pavement < wordup

i Coulda Been An All Star But i Was Committed Ta Drugs
Started Off As A Witness But Then i Started Livin With Thugs < Transfermation , Real niggaz gotta make


Born 2 Steppin Out Tha Bricks Not Jersey Projects is Where i Lived
Nana is Gone But She's Still Livin in Every Prayer i Give

i Liked Dis Piece son.. ALOT of Reality brought in it , Alotta Shit u Culd relate 2
u Wus jus Real wid Da Whole piece.. Gave a Goood Vibe
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Shaz quoted a few bars i liked but i liked this one too

i'd Say i've Never Lost A Fight But it's Fact That's A Lie
Everytime it Rains i Reach Up And Try Ta Grab Tha Sky

nice^,flow wuz nice as hell as it usually iz,cudda been alil longer but its str8 keep droppin u been on'a role lately
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Cormega and Pac,, two of the realest MCS...word up
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

deep shyt, nice flow , nice multis.. overall it was nice lol.. impressed me with this one 4/5
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i think that everything that needed to be quoted got quoted, so big ups kid, this shit was nice, best ive seen from you yet, i liked the deepness of pureness of it
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Aye real good shit man. Like Ghost said best Ive seen from you too. Flowed right on point as always and good story behind it.
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This shit was nice man.
This was real shit. This was also showin u a very versatile mc.
Props my dude.
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I'm feeling the 1st part of this very ill dawg liked how it's a story type of drop imma go 2 da next 1 now haha dope drop homie
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They Ask What i'm Doin i Just Express Dreams When i Write
This one was my fav'

nice story behind it... i'll read the rest of them too
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it's Known Pops Was Gone And Moms Was A Feind For Tha Pipe
They Ask What i'm Doin i Just Express Dreams When i Write-----super nice line dawg.
this is old, i can see a huge diferrence in your style from then to now. i dig it none the less.
We must always and forever have hip-hops best interest at heart. We must allow ourselves to be critical of the music and culture so that ideas and beliefs that aren’t progressive can be eliminated and made unattractive to our youth. Our allegiance to Hip Hop has to be about more than romanticized ideas of misogyny, materialism, murder and mayhem. Instead our allegiances must be rooted in what we individually and collectively determine beneficial. The story of misogyny, materialism, murder and mayhem doesn’t end well. We’ve got proof. Doing what one believes is individually and collectively beneficial may allow for a better ending. Or better yet, no ending at all.
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