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Cee4
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REAL TALK PART 2

Post by Cee4 »

Theres more to me than punchlines, I got intelligence but seldom ever use it
I know im better than Haz, i`ve beat him twice I don't know why I need to prove it
I should display my versatility, I can rap about the streets but I also got a brain
I don't disguise weak punches with ebonics, these one trick pony's not the same
I been through so much shit, but like Bills dick, it aint just aint got touched on
Sorry that's a cheap hit, I aint going back n forth cause honestly the buzz gone
Haz only 16 with too much testosterone, I suppose this is his way to release
When I was his age I was always fighting too and having run ins with police
In real life, If he got in my face like this back then, id have did more than jab him
To defend myself, I swear on my moms life there a good chance id of stabbed him
I cant hate on half of his rhymes, I cant say he aint good he`s alright
But it`s blatant he`s delusional if he thinks he`s runnin dudes off the site
Paranoia got him thinking im a racist, im really sorry if I hurt his feelings
But he got the traits of a female, face it he gotta pull up his skirt stop squealing
I know he dont hate me, he offered me an olive branch and a track by JR Writer
As for that dude Bill, hes got a chip on his shoulder coz he knows that AR`s tighter
Bill tries far too hard to impress, to no avail it only highlights insecurity
thinks he`s got a stigma, its nothin don't worry, this shits a twilight of obscurity
He`s got a false sense of importance, any little thing in a battle he must review it
Leave the threads alone, Like Haz with Virals graphics he reads too much in to it
He needs help, he could become a decent mod if he gets a better man to tutor
im worried about u Bill, please for your health`s sake log off the damn computer
Real Talk
Im not proud of my bitchin, I cant take criticism, I wasn't scared about that bet
we all lost respect, shit happens, but I can no longer say that i care about my rep
we can have beefs and join crews, like the rappers that we idolise its clear
That its all good but I been neglecting ma girl, in truth im tired of guys on here
The Gods of War was some fun, but its quickly joined the list of sinkin crews
it`s ur life, do what u choose, but only a geek would diss me for drinkin booze
In life if there was trouble, I could always rely on some wild dudes for back up
The net aint the same, I realise now i cant make every lil child keep his trap shut
I dropped Theifs Theme, most people took it well but a couple dudes got rattled
I don't know if its a coincidence but all of a sudden I started to lose my battles
I can only speak for Cee, but Id rather have a site where dope raps are been spittin
Maybe its just me, I aint excited if theres 10 online but its only active with bitchin
Im gonna let my bars to do the talkin, I don't expect these so called men to follow
i`ve got thoughts in my mind of just walkin but i`ll prolly be back again tomorrow
I hope they leave a stupid comment, this real talk, it only means this blasts heard
Go ahead do ya worst, im the bigger man you can have the last word
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Post by Haz »

lol Cee u Kno Somethin I Notice?

you Mention me sooo Much

ur Must be Heart Broken i Raped u in dat Battle Lmmfao..

I can only speak for Cee, but Id rather have a site where dope raps are been spittin <- i wish da Same shit
Maybe its just me, I aint excited if theres 10 online but its only active with bitchin <- Tru & u Do alot of it


But it`s blatant he`s delusional if he thinks he`s runnin dudes off the site < Gutta & Rhino ROFL

Dis wusnt Impressive At all my Dood.. it wus jus a Buncha Bullshit followed up By a Buncha Bullshit

& i Wusnt Dissin U Fa Drinkin u Dumbass.. i Sed Niggaz Musta Bin Drinkin 2 Much of your Booz
(Thinkin dey Hot)..


Dis wus Ok .. i Aint See Where u Got the idea This wus Versatile.. seems like a Average Cee Falloff Drop

but on Some real.. i Hope u can get back To da Old u lol Soo i wouldnt Have 2 Be da only 1 Spittin sum
Dope shit..
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Lol @ hazard saying, "Lmfao cee u musta cried after our battle".
Faggot need hypes himself up and makes false stories coz he's such a bitch. Lmfao.

So we've established the fact that he's got beef.

THEN he drops this jaw dropper.



"but on Some real.. i Hope u can get back To da Old u lol Soo i wouldnt Have 2 Be da only 1 Spittin sum
Dope shit.."

He manages to kiss some ass in his beef :O. No ways.


(( EXPOZED )) COZ IM GANGSTA.

Fuck off.
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Post by MesaR »

this drop was pretty good, keeping it real. nice concept your are good versitile emcee

He needs help, he could become a decent mod if he gets a better man to tutor
im worried about u Bill, please for your health`s sake log off the damn computer
Real Talk

Word ^, that was a pretty decent bar, probley my fav.. good shit bro

but on Some real.. i Hope u can get back To da Old u lol Soo i wouldnt Have 2 Be da only 1 Spittin sum
Dope shit..

hazard, get a grip.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Nice drop, flowed well.

As for that dude Bill, hes got a chip on his shoulder coz he knows that AR`s tighter - Me n Arv are actually tight outside the site. Why would I care if he's better than me?

Bill tries far too hard to impress, to no avail it only highlights insecurity
thinks he`s got a stigma - Only reason you said that is you saw Plex say it about me in the box. Use the word correctly and in the right context if you're going to use thw word.

I aint excited if theres 10 online but its only active with bitchin - Agree with that.

I don't know if its a coincidence but all of a sudden I started to lose my battles - When I got here you were on top of your game, a month later we were supposed to collab on a political piece and you never picked it up. Your drops didnt hold emotion anymore and I really dont know why.

i`ve got thoughts in my mind of just walkin but i`ll prolly be back again tomorrow - No reason to leave. E-beef is E-beef. This ain't real life. Shits for fun and nothing more than that.

any little thing in a battle he must review it - I can redirect you to a topic where you tried to get a battle reversed from months ago. Don't be a Hypocrite.

im worried about u Bill, please for your health`s sake log off the damn computer - Now see, I liked this drop, cause it was as you said, real talk, but dont state something as fact when it is really an opinion. You dont know what I do with my life. Don't act like you do.

Good stuff though.
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Post by Cee4 »

thanks for the feed people.
and Bill my drops have hardly ever been full of emotion
usually just a bunch of punchlines lol. that why i said i should be more versatile. coz i know im smarter than the majority on here.
and yeah the political piece was on my old computer and i lost everythin when i dropped it
i only got my new computer a few days ago
no offence bill but 4 people said they wanted to do the collab
arvincible hit me up if u still wanna do it.

TGYH i deliberitly left the random punchlines out. i wanted to focus more on the flow side of things
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Post by Haz »

lol Raiza i Hurt your Feelins so Bad every Thread u Drop in u Type My Name u Fuckin Homo
Cee knows its True.. he's Droped Alotta Bettah Shit.. & Sequence stop Typin Get to Are Battle u Lil Gurl
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Post by Gutta »

is Haz and me the youngest on da site?
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Post by Brah-Vo »

no me and seq are.
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Post by Haz »

Yeah but Yall niggahz Suck ass Real Talk

So Yeah Me & Gutta is da Youngest on Da Site
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Post by Arvincible »

I dropped Theifs Theme, most people took it well but a couple dudes got rattled
I don't know if its a coincidence but all of a sudden I started to lose my battles
I can only speak for Cee, but Id rather have a site where dope raps are been spittin
Maybe its just me, I aint excited if theres 10 online but its only active with bitchin
Im gonna let my bars to do the talkin, I don't expect these so called men to follow
i`ve got thoughts in my mind of just walkin but i`ll prolly be back again tomorrow
That is some real shit my dude, it flowed real smoothly and fuck what thesee niggas say about ur punchlines
this isnt about that. good stuff man props
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

shit was pretty dope, long but it wasnt bad... nice punches and multies, lines kinda dragged a lil in places but overall good read
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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