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A Topical On Drive By Type of Murder

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Yo this aint the type of lifestyle i live..its just a topical..


Knocking off the hungry bitches One By One..
Ridin slow right pass got my hand on the gun..
Pull up on the Strip..
insert the clip..
my man stuggled turned the gass and pulled the handbreak..
just thinking bout the gore just made my hands shake..
i thought to myself cut-the-shit..
grab the heat and buck-this-trick..

i hit him so hard that i put his "son-in-a-lean"
and if his bitch acts up i put my "gun-in-her-splean"
and his brothers heart rate will run off a machine..
and his daughter aint got support so she be a crack feind"

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Post by Brah-Vo »

Piece was straight.
Ya structure was abit iffy at the start but it smoothed out.
Nice to see use of multis, try and use multis every bar
keep up.
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Thx Homie..
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