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He Dont Believe in god but i Guess he Dyin-2-See-He
Might as Well Say hez "Ghost"..(No Body) Tryin-2-Be-Me

It Makez Me Sick if u Wanna Put up Stakez i'll Pick
You Put ya Life Up & if u Lose i'll Stake u Prick..

"Broken Lighter" Diz (Flama) Couldnt Takah Flick
but He Can Act Enough on dis Site To Makah Flick

Main-Rollz Playd by u N ya Mans Lame-Souls..
"Ripd Kicks" humorin Demselves Still GIT KICKS

"What these bitches Want from a nigga?" my Style & Swag
my Piles of Bags?? or my Judgement on um , Shuld i strt "Trialin Fags?"

Fuck-Ya-Teamz Suckah Scream when Bush hedgers to ya back Pluck ya Spleen
Piece-By-Piece i Cant Get "Bought in to Treason" if you Try n "Lease-My-Peace".

im Above Growin Dere Atleast-Seeds dats why Dey Stay ina ball I grow & get least feed
dey "Require Water" if a doods tryna be a "crown bud" hazard'll Have "Sire Slaughterd"

if u Spit on da Mic u'll Blow ears away Lyk a Rockit Sound jus dont botha Stop It Clown
u Tryna Elevated like u Came Off a Jet but u Ain getin nowhere like Plex's sex Activity OFF DA NET
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Post by Brah-Vo »

This piece was nice.
Wasnt bad, wasnt anything special.
just another hazard piece.
Startw as abit hazy but u made it back

It Makez Me Sick if u Wanna Put up Stakez i'll Pick
You Put ya Life Up & if u Lose i'll Stake u Prick..

"Broken Lighter" Diz (Flama) Couldnt Takah Flick
but He Can Act Enough on dis Site To Makah Flick

^^ didnt like those lines


Fuck-Ya-Teamz Suckah Scream when Bush hedgers to ya back Pluck ya Spleen
Piece-By-Piece i Cant Get "Bought in to Treason" if you Try n "Lease-My-Peace".

im Above Growin Dere Atleast-Seeds dats why Dey Stay ina ball I grow & get least feed
dey "Require Water" if a doods tryna be a "crown bud" hazard'll Have "Sire Slaughterd"

^^ liked those bars.

Leave proper feed on my drop with arv btw.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

good creative shyt, u seem to be improvin with each bar, now if only we could get u to drop an audio battle verse on me lol.. that'll be the day haha.. good stuff tho
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Post by Khan »

it was good, for some reason i felt like it was more of a poem.

but like i said it was good.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

was that first line directed towards me??? either way this wasnt that bad, like ekoms said got better towards the end of it
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Post by Haz »

lol Knew u Wuld Ask

Nah ,

"Say hes Ghost "No body" Tryin 2 Be me..

Ghosts have no Bodys... No dis Wusnt Directed 2 U...

Thanks For da Feed Every it'll be Returned
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

it didnt sound like but i jus wanted to clarify, u know?
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Post by thaphantom »

nice drop.....yeah it didnt kinda sound more poetic then a rap...but you see pac pulled off the poetic stuff....but yeah where ya audio's at i wanna hear u spit?
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Post by Arvincible »

lmao you already got my feed bastard, this shit is funny,

i thought you were dissin ghost too
but yeah peace
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