Bullets And GunSmoke (Raiza Debut Track)

[Brah-Vo]

Uhh yeh.
First track. Don't go to harsh
3 verses (complete with sound effects )
Yeh i'm using a shitty mic. I know. I needa get a new one.
But i'm broke so bear with me.
Beats Used: Get 'Em Daddy - Cam'Ron Feat. Hell Rell.

Constructive crticism and useful feedback accepted.
No hate feed (Haz).
If you do want to leave feed haz, Don't go off at me saying you're better on the mic. You probably are. This is my first Track.

Anyway.
Enjoy guys ^_^.

[Brah-Vo]

oh and uhh i think the upload didnt complete fully. So if it cuts off randomly just ignore that.
FEED ME

[thaphantom]

lol where you from? and why dh was you yellin in the mic at first? lol you started off on beat...you kinda fell off beat...did you spit this straight through then add some ad-libs? is this a computer microphone? and are you movin back and forth from the mic? lol sorry for all the questions..... don't hold the mic...you hear to much air in it....you need to get a mic with a sound depressor... i think you'd actually do pretty good on audio's though....this ya first time recording eve?[just answer the questions i can try to give u a lil bit of advice]

[Brah-Vo]

Lol i was yellin coz my mic is shit and it doesnt register sound properly.
Yeh i added ad libs. I did the first verse, took a break, then from continuation did the 2nd verse etc etc.
yeh its a computer microphone. It's shit. But it's all i could afford. So sorry about the quality.
And no im not movin back and forth from the mic. The mic is just plain shit.
Yeh i gotta put a sock over my mic so u dont hear me breathing like a muthafucka.Lmao.
Yeh this is my first time recording.

[Arvincible]

yeess u are better on audio than text lol
But you have a lot of stuff to improve on. Its a great start for a first ever.
Ummm i give you props for the track. I'm starting to consider audio as well now, but i dont know how to do any of that tech stuff lol.
All the "yao,yaw,yao" had me laughing a bit though lol fuckin asian.

i want you to keep this shit up dude, dont stop movin up.

[Brah-Vo]

Lmfao @ the yao yaw shit Lololol.

Thanks for the feed arv. Aprreciated.

[thaphantom]

lol yeah i kinda figured that...sounds like my microphone...but....what you gotta do is make sure you stay at that right distance from it...and dont yell...when u find that distance stay there...and yeah u was a lil bit too close...turn ya mic up..you know how? take ya time wit it...memorize the verse if you slip up on it...re-take it... you never want to stutter on a word...it makes you skip off the beat..unless it was written in ya lyrics....make sure you can ryhme it exactly on beat..dont try to rush it....how long it take you to put this together?[it wasnt that bad.. lyrics coulda been a lil better] quality sucked...shoulda turned the beat down just a lil so ya vocals would be there...what program you use to put it together?

[MesaR]

this fucking sucked nuts for an audio..











Lol, nah this was alright for your first track man, lyrics seemed alright some punched were maddddd playyyyyed like that punk aston kutcher line, and the yao ywan thing is pretty funny, i cracked out a giggle there aswell lmao, but yeah you can only imrpove, this was deff alot better then my first audio so props keep it up.

[Omega Bill]

Good shit.

Better mic = better audio. For a first track you did pretty well, could've been even better but the damn mic kinda made it sound like you fell off at times.

Get a better mic for sure. Also, I didn't expect a deeper voice from you, lmao.

Good for a first track, lookin forward to the next one.

[Brah-Vo]

Good lookin out on the feed tgyh, bill and seq.. much appreciated.
Took me about 3 days to put eyything together. Usin audacity, its a shit program but its enough.
And yeh i def need a new mic. i Tried putting a sock or bandana over it but i had rap louder lmao ..
I need money to either hire out a studio or buy a new mic.

[thaphantom]

lmao yo the most easiest programs to use...are acid pro....and cool edit....cool edit you gotta know the beat by heart...acid pro you can hear the beat when you record...i heard cubase was good but i never used it....like everyone said this aint bad for your first one...shoulda took a lil longer....if the audio didnt sound right u shoulda tried to do it...never give up untill you get it on point...i wouldn't audio battle yet...i'd work on trying to learn how to get it sounding right and on point you know? but everybody keep the feed goin here..i've listened to it about 5-7 times already trying to see where ur mistakes are..you didn't do too bad

[Brah-Vo]

iight Man. Awesome. Thanks for the detailed feed.
I dont think i can use cool edit, hard for me already to memorize the verse AND the beat.
Audacity lets me listen to the beat while im recording tho.
but thanks for the detailed feed my dude. Good Lookin out.

Can we get some feed from Ekoms, Kurse, Viral or Tramatik here? Lol.

[Ambiguous Realm]

lol, its too messy, but overall its str8, lyrics ain't great.. the style n presence is koo tho, definitely need to get urself a better mic tho..and a pop filter

[Brah-Vo]

Word. Thanks for the feed ekoms.
Imma work on my quality on my next track.
Or try and filter the pops and shit if i dont have a new mic by then.

[UNeeK]

Sup Bruh...Thiiss iz pretty dope fo a first track..

LLOL i shat myself @ tha start of it ..( YO YO WUT NIGGA WHAT!!)

Lol

Naa man liked it & lyricz were tight