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<b>Ekoms</b>, I got more talent in a hair follicle, an my rhymes are wicked n diabolical
<b>Incredible</b> wanna do a topical, kid apparently doesnt that Im known to be unstoppable
Improbable is the chance of <b>Arvincble</b> doing a line that actually doesnt lack a punch
N <b>Haz</b> broke <b>Ghosts</b> back carrying him in our tag battle and now hes got a hunch
N I got myself a question for <b>Plex</b>, howre you not gonna battle when Im whats nextin b?
You wont accept cause you testin me? If do had my number Id have to tell him to stop textin me
Cause I aint stressin over the faggot <b>Dead Silence</b>, I aint worried about a white boy with in-bred violence
Or his boy A1 steak sauce, shit, I meant <b>A.I.</b> whos gonna learn Im the boss n he the next to die
<b>Khan</b> tired of the beef he can only eat a veggie snack, and on your drop what was fed was whack
Youll be outta here quicker than a heart attack, no one here can phase me with words cause smarts they lack
And rhymes they jack, like <b>Swagger</b> bitin off letsbeef, and I knocked him first round he need a new setta teeth
And <b>Raiza</b> tryna be the next me, and his rhymes are gonna be covered in my toxic spit theyll drench
Cause the last time someone had a fuckin 10 loss streak they were in a war fightin for the French
I havent seen <b>8th</b> rap in a hot minute, but if he did Id be nappin through it like Im in a massge store
And this patriotic whack ass always preachin prolly has a Confederate Flag painted on his garage door
<b>Phantom</b> is gay right down to his core, cant even do his homework, failed school with a fuckin F +
For him slittin wrists is a must, and he couldnt even show up in our battle when I cut him had him leakin pus
An I just cant do a diss without mention <b>Gutta</b>, who couldnt cut through a rhyme if it was made outta hot butter
Leave that dude cold cant shake this shiver, dont wanna fuck me Im worse for ya health than sorosis of the liver
<b>Cee4</b> dont mention me in your fuckin scrips cause Ill do just like I did Gutta and leave you with blue lips
Crack ya body and leave ya with bruised hips, I embarassed you once dont make me do a new diss
<b>16micz</b> who? Kid hatin everybody jus like the kikes do, quit being over-emotional bitch noone likes you
His animals he might screw, an I jus might stab you with daggers through my eyes like Im usin Sight-Fu
Back to <b>Plex</b>, Only thing you got in any drop is multis, but I can see right through you ya lines are faulty
Couldnt clean his own battle grounds so he called me, ye aint better son, ya just took some stalled E
<b>U-Neek</b>? Boy your shits weak, and if you takin notes from <b>Sequence</b> your bars will be shitty so stop
Cause <b>Sequence</b> got more force in his mutlis than a Jedi and more holes in his scheme then Biggie and Pac
Now let this be a listen to those who act a fool, know who I am cause if anyone else wanna try tell them this rule
Im not gonna stop the dissin to those tools, cause yall spit same shit and yall jus got on the bus. Welcome to School


Seems to be the new thing, whole site disses. Enjoy. Changed my normal color that way yall can see the bolded names better, haha.
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Post by thaphantom »

what was this? why you dissin on everybody?
Never let life live you, You always live life.
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Post by Haz »

I havent seen 8th rap in a hot minute, but if he did Id be nappin through it like Im in a massge store
And this patriotic whack ass always preachin prolly has a Confederate Flag painted on his garage door

lol^


16micz who? Kid hatin everybody jus like the kikes do, quit being over-emotional bitch noone likes you
His animals he might screw, an I jus might stab you with daggers through my eyes like Im usin Sight-Fu


more holes in his scheme then Biggie and Pac lol


Pretty Decent Drop.. u Dissed Alotta Niggahz...

Dose were Sum of my Fav lines..

Keep Droppin
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

Improbable is the chance of Arvincble doing a line that actually doesnt lack a punch
N Haz broke Ghosts back carrying him in our tag battle and now hes got a hunch

are you sayin he carried me or i carried him

anyways nice shit keep droppin, ur elevatin wit every drop, i think the bars were a lil to long but nice punches and personals. loved the big and pac line...
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Omega Bill »

I said you carried him and and now you got a hunch, lol.

Thanks for the feed guys.
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Post by Gutta »

nigguh when did u leave me with blue lips????????? wtf?
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Post by Omega Bill »

Just now. :-).
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Post by Haz »

lol Ghost Carried Me u Sed??...

O i Thought u Sed i Carried him..

We Kool But i Think its Time Fa Me 2 Take a Shot Back At Cha..
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Post by Arvincible »

bars are still too long but fuck man, this was the best you ever dropped
good stuff keep the consistency goin, you just need to win your damn battles now lol
fuck you for that line you got on me.
Ill kill you any day lol i feel angry.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

nice piece.
Flow was abit off, Multis seemed abit forced.
You gotta put more multis or inner rhymes in your bars or shorten em.
But good job,
Keep up.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by Khan »

Khan tired of the beef he can only eat a veggie snack, and on your drop what was fed was whack.

^^dude i read that, sat back, and laughed, lol. it was nice, i like the whole idea of the drop, more of a "Fuck Ya'll This Is What I Think" type of drop, the only thing i'll have to say is, your bars were too long, like raiza said you need to add multis or inner rhymes in your lines/bars, but other than that, i liked it and yes you can look forward to me saying something back haha.


Good Drop.
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Post by Omega Bill »

lol, thanks for all the feed guys.

Im glad more people are gonna respond. Usually they just cry about it in the thread and dont respond, like Gutta did. haha.

Thanks for all the feed though.
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Post by Gutta »

U WHACK AS FUCKKKK
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Post by complexity »

You're controversial to say the least.

You're also coming off a bit arrogant. When you diss the entire site. Especially, in a diss
with less comedy and more sting.

Overall though, it would be hard to argue the creativity of this drop. Anytime, that you put up your own obstacle like using all them names and conqueror it. And test yourself to the extremes. You're the winner.

"I havent seen 8th rap in a hot minute, but if he did Id be nappin through it like Im in a massge store
And this patriotic whack ass always preachin prolly has a Confederate Flag painted on his garage door "

That was stupid, 8th is black homie. And dissing him is kinda cheap because he won't read this.


My favorite disses.

"U-Neek? Boy your shits weak, and if you takin notes from Sequence your bars will be shitty so stop
Cause Sequence got more force in his mutlis than a Jedi and more holes in his scheme then Biggie and Pac "

"Improbable is the chance of Arvincble doing a line that actually doesnt lack a punch
N Haz broke Ghosts back carrying him in our tag battle and now hes got a hunch "

"Crack ya body and leave ya with bruised hips, I embarassed you once dont make me do a new diss
16micz who? Kid hatin everybody jus like the kikes do, quit being over-emotional bitch noone likes you"
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Post by Omega Bill »

Thanks for the feed, Plex.


Gutta - Do somethin then.
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