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No Beef Cee, Just a Good Ol' Spar Lol.

it's a Startling-Ride, i Kill With Bars-in-My-Stride ..||
it's Like The Lion King Set, Cuz ill Leave 'Scars-in-ur-Pride' ..||
im a Man Of Many Methods, And i Kill The Weak-For-Sport ..||
id Leave 'Shells All Around Cee' Like a Fucking Beach-Resort ..||
But Nah, My 'Pen Kills', Sort Of Like 'Capital-Punishment' ..||*
it's Like if Christie Returned Now, im 'Back-n-im-Runnin-Shit' ..||**
i Give Respect-When-it's-Due, But im Not Second-To-u ..||
Only Room For One King, You'll Be Wrecked-When-im-Through ..||
ur Whole Style's Redundant, as an Emcee ur a Tragedy ..||
Only Time 'C4's Getting Airplay' is On The Channel After-3 ..||***
u Got a Mighty Fine Record, But u Can't Handle The Veterans-Cee ..||
26 Letters in The Alphabet And Who Uses Them Better-Than-Me? ..||
Nobody, The Damage i Cause To u Will Never Be-Restored ..||
When illest is DEAD is The Only Time it's a Fucking 'Weegie-Board' ..||****

*Pen - Penetentiary. (Or However u Spell it).
**Linford Christie Was a Track Runner, He's Old Now So He'd Run Shit (Compared To Others) Kind Of a Wordplay in There.
***in Britain, We Have Channel 4 And it Gets Called C4.
****Weegie = Name For People From Glasgow. Ouija = Weegie. Donno What a Quija Board is? Google is ur Friend.
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Lol pretty nice...kinda got confusing...but it was nice
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Lol What Was Confusing?

Not Getting On at u Or Anything, Maybe The Executions Were Sloppy Or Something.
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"im a Man Of Many Methods, And i Kill The Weak-For-Sport ..||
id Leave 'Shells All Around Cee' Like a Fucking Beach-Resort ..|| "

Ill line.

ur Whole Style's Redundant, as an Emcee ur a Tragedy ..||
Only Time 'C4's Getting Airplay' is On The Channel After-3 ..||***

Another ill one.

The rest was good too, but them were my favorite lines.

Good to see you back on the punchline tip, word, iight, homie g, word life, ye, peace out, keep it real, same, cracker, etc.

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Post by Cee4 »

ha ha nice verse. is this a one off are are u back battling?


it's a Startling-Ride, i Kill With Bars-in-My-Stride ..||
it's Like The Lion King Set, Cuz ill Leave 'Scars-in-ur-Pride' ..||
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i liked this one


Nobody, The Damage i Cause To u Will Never Be-Restored ..||
When illest is DEAD is The Only Time it's a Fucking 'Weegie-Board' ..||****
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lmao



i`ll prolly get back at u soon.
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Thanks Me Lovelies. ill Get Round To Leaving The Feed Now.
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Post by Haz »

Cee Aint Punchlineking Wut soeva

Dom you is Da PunchlineKing

& Me . im The Runna Up yaaa Digg!!!


it's Like The Lion King Set, Cuz ill Leave 'Scars-in-ur-Pride' ..||


ur Whole Style's Redundant, as an Emcee ur a Tragedy ..||
Only Time 'C4's Getting Airplay' is On The Channel After-3 ..||*** LMAO!

When illest is DEAD is The Only Time it's a Fucking 'Weegie-Board' ..||**** < Damn
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Oh it was confusing to me...is cause i was just reading it you know...so it took my slower to get it..that's all...
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Word. Uppayyyne.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Shit was dope.
Punches were very creative.
Looks Like u aint that rusty domdom.
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Post by Glamtrash »

Niiice job dude. Quite the comeback. Now, keep with it.

u Got a Mighty Fine Record, But u Can't Handle The Veterans-Cee ..||
26 Letters in The Alphabet And Who Uses Them Better-Than-Me? ..||
Nobody, The Damage i Cause To u Will Never Be-Restored ..||
When illest is DEAD is The Only Time it's a Fucking 'Weegie-Board' ..||****


Sick shit dude. Probably my favourite part. Mind you, it's not your best, by any means, but I'm sure you know this.

You know you got skillz. You've got phenominal puchline/wordplay goin' for you. And you're a sadistic sonofabitch, which also works in your favour. Keep writing asshole.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

not bad, i like that beach resort line..but ur no punchline king..previous tag team battle already proved that haha, good stuff tho
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^Says ur Homo Ass
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EkomS wrote:not bad, i like that beach resort line..but ur no punchline king..previous tag team battle already proved that haha, good stuff tho
if i Had as Many Bars as u it Might've Been a Different Story.
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