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Diss-Cussin Illest

Post by Arvincible »

Funny convo

Arv: Green
RS: Red

Yo Raiza! You been checkin up illest cuz there's a buncha-funny-shit
Like Wild Bill's picture looks like he about to hump-somebody's-dick

Lol dude funny that Harle acts like she a hunni bitch
but her rhymes are shit, so i white it out like a bunnys clit


And that other nigga Hazard claims to kill random dudes-in-sight
But hows the nigga gon' run shit if he could even choose-his-wife!!

LMAO! He aint dropped a track coz he's Crude on Mics
Dead Silence.. No one wants to see his comeback coz the dude aint tight
Yeh with Subsist dudes a fuckin terrorist
When he didnt blow himself up, his dad called him a heretic


Cee 'blows' as my style flows, between the two of us there's no comparin-it
And Phantom better get off illest cuz we all know he softer than a pair-a-tits
And that dude Sym really is a Ghost, cuz nobody believes-in-him
And he's PMin niggas on the site just so ppl would be-feedin-him

LOL How about Big P? Talkins about smokin trees and gin
Yeh Haz so G he prolly gonna die, but aint nobody grieve for him
But dont worry i got respect for Kurse his tracks aint whack
But aint Seen DJ in a minit .. Meaning that Jesus Black aint Back


Hah! did u check if ThatGuyYouHate still likes rappin bout clappin lame gats
Dat boring pussy better watchout cuz he know I always be slappin gay cats!!
N how does Gutta spray macs? When the guy left cuz Haz spiked him out
Dude enuff talking shit though cuz now ill make like three strikes...im out!

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Post by Brah-Vo »

Lmao! Its funny how this can just come spontaneously .

The wonders of MSN :)

Feed peepz.
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Post by MesaR »

pretty funny, in some cases was this a cypher or did this just happen lmao?

arv what is ur msn/hotmail i would like to do one
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Post by Brah-Vo »

This just happened. Lmao .
We were spose to collab,
But we fucked it up. So he went offline.
Came back on and opened with that bar.
So we just went off it.
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yep its like key-styled, cuz we just kept going


uppin for feed
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Post by Arvincible »

lol it was all fun and games no beef but go ahead id like to read something!

Anyways Thanks to me Raiza is getting better lol
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Post by Haz »

HaHa i cant Even Choose My wife!
lol Arv, Sorry brotha ima have 2 Have u bodied
& Raiza just isnt a Threat but "cute" Lil back & Forth u guys had goin on

LMAO! He aint dropped a track coz he's Crude on Mics
^^ Dats funny cus Arv has Both of My Trackz u Dumb chink Lmfao

Cee 'blows' as my style flows, between the two of us there's no comparin-it
And Phantom better get off illest cuz we all know he softer than a pair-a-tits
And that dude Sym really is a Ghost, cuz nobody believes-in-him
And he's PMin niggas on the site just so ppl would be-feedin-him

^ Best lil Thing out the whole piece.

lol
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Post by Cee4 »

this was nice. really good for a cypher. i would say u both came equal here. the flow, multis were good. Raiza u impressed me more than normal. i dunno Raiza u need to get more consistent. i see u droppin like this then u drop some wack shit.


And that other nigga Hazard claims to kill random dudes-in-sight
But hows the nigga gon' run shit if he could even choose-his-wife!!
^^^^
it has been used before but its still funny

Yeh with Subsist dudes a fuckin terrorist
When he didnt blow himself up, his dad called him a heretic
^^^^
dope


Cee 'blows' as my style flows, between the two of us there's no comparin-it
And Phantom better get off illest cuz we all know he softer than a pair-a-tits
And that dude Sym really is a Ghost, cuz nobody believes-in-him
And he's PMin niggas on the site just so ppl would be-feedin-him
^^^^
this flowed real good


overall this was nice. keep droppin
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Post by Haz »

Lol dude funny that Harle acts like she a hunni bitch

This line Wus inaccurate..


Yo Raiza! You been checkin up illest cuz there's a buncha-funny-shit
Like Wild Bill's picture looks like he about to hump-somebody's-dick

Sum multis, a Lil humor in Da Bar

And that other nigga Hazard claims to kill random dudes-in-sight
But hows the nigga gon' run shit if he could even choose-his-wife!!

ok Multis^ . a Lil Humor on da Wife part

Hah! did u check if ThatGuyYouHate still likes rappin bout clappin lame gats
Dat boring pussy better watchout cuz he know I always be slappin gay cats!!
N how does Gutta spray macs? When the guy left cuz Haz spiked him out
Dude enuff talking shit though cuz now ill make like three strikes...im out! < notta Good punch homie

u Gotta have a betta Closer..

u Haddah Personal on TheGuy so datz a Jab i G uess
Really Isnt a Personal but somewhere Around Dere

Over All Dis Piece Gets a 5/10

you Brought the 5 Arv, Raiza just Slacked, betta luck Next time


LOL How about Big P? Talkins about smokin trees and gin
Yeh Haz so G he prolly gonna die, but aint nobody grieve for him
But dont worry i got respect for Kurse his tracks aint whack
But aint Seen DJ in a minit .. Meaning that Jesus Black aint Back

Wackest part in da Whole Piece^

D.j.s Still Up Makin Beats like a mothafuckah.. & Mixin otha Shit..




Cee 'blows' as my style flows, between the two of us there's no comparin-it
And Phantom better get off illest cuz we all know he softer than a pair-a-tits
And that dude Sym really is a Ghost, cuz nobody believes-in-him
And he's PMin niggas on the site just so ppl would be-feedin-him

Alrighht Multis Here & There, ur disses connected Sumwhat
The Cee Diss Didnt Connect at all though

Ghost one jabed Ghost though.
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Post by Arvincible »

Thanks Hazard feed is appreciated
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Post by Omega Bill »

Good stuff from both. Some seemed a bit forced like the line against me, yall coulda dissed me a little better than sayin I was gonna hump a dick, and you both know it, lol.

Lol dude funny that Harle acts like she a hunni bitch
but her rhymes are shit, so i white it out like a bunnys clit

No hate. Hunni bitch doesnt make sense and never mention an animals genitals ever again, lmao.

Raizas best:
Yeh with Subsist dudes a fuckin terrorist
When he didnt blow himself up, his dad called him a heretic

Arvs best:
And that dude Sym really is a Ghost, cuz nobody believes-in-him
And he's PMin niggas on the site just so ppl would be-feedin-him

Great punch, got a sneaky little punch in there.

Good stuff though over-all. Raiza - You keep improvin keep ya head up and keep droppin.
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

In my eyes this wasn't bad, but not great...Kind of fits in that gap, some of the personals on here were funny. Like the ghost one yeah I got a laugh out of that, and Razia came decent as well. He just needed to polish his verse up a little more, Arv could have done a little of that. But for the most part, solid drops overall...
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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