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When Its War The Prince Gets Taken Out

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Dudes decorating their bars with wordplay, good luck being an artist
They can have a million and one metaphors, I`ll just be the hardest
voting's went crazy, we`re level, but that's 4 times I killed her n ruled
my shits for the adults only, I thought they had web filters at school
Obsessive, got a Cee4 voodo doll, bitch I`ll leave ya scarred and shelled
black magic don't work, coz like Wild Bill`s sixth sense, im hard to spell
Your a one liner, u couldn't stop my flow if u used the Nile`s dam
shut ya dirty mouth, I`ll send ya ass six feet south like Juveniles fam
Talk shit to get a reaction, like a fishy Aphrodite tryna raiz dick
Its Like I cheated on him, coz now hes tryna hop on the guy i hates shit
The crown stay in the UK, I am the punchline king that's whats evident
America got no royal history, just fuckin cowboys and shot presidents
Dom is the only competition I got, battling this Haz sucka is kids sport
The butcha? Dead meat leave him cold, RARE! Like a murda in Bridgeport
IM BAD! like this Haz been`s grammar, the prince has been hammered
Over the ropes, make this paki disapear quicker than Prince Naseem Hamed
Im “A class, ur a grade “Dâ€
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Post by Haz »

lol@ Rare like a Murder in Bridgeport
dats Funny cus Niggaz Alwayz gettin Bodied round here


This Wus "cute" Cee lol u Had Some Punches
Tried To Ride My Dick Wid Dat Run D-M-C Wordplay which ain Really Work out 2 Good
it Wus a Solid Diss Though, u Aint Takin No One Though My Reply'll Be up Tonite
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Post by Cee4 »

-.HaZarD.- wrote:lol@ Rare like a Murder in Bridgeport
dats Funny cus Niggaz Alwayz gettin Bodied round here
funny coz i heard their was only 13 murders in 2007
http://www.topix.com/forum/city/new-hav ... 37RM1UA6BE

you got murdered more times than that in 2007.

lookin forward to your diss. like i said i will leave honest feed on it. and please dont start the feeposting here or i`ll do the same in yours. and yeah i know this is a freepost
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Post by Arvincible »

LOL hazard that feedback looks exactly like wat u left me...

Anyways this was hilarious, great punches again


voting's went crazy, we`re level, but that's 4 times I killed her n ruled
my shits for the adults only, I thought they had web filters at school
Obsessive, got a Cee4 voodo doll, bitch I`ll leave ya scarred and shelled
black magic don't work, coz like Wild Bill`s sixth sense, im hard to spell
Your a one liner, u couldn't stop my flow if u used the Nile`s dam
shut ya dirty mouth, I`ll send ya ass six feet south like Juveniles fam

^^this stood out imo


it flowed real well and dont say dom's ur only competition because u know there are other threats
developing in this site....(ahem)
and yeah the nile's dam line was my favorite punch cuz you said he was a one liner and he couldnt stop u lol

Web filters at school??! lmao those four words said a lot

keep it comin, this was a good piece overall
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Post by Haz »

LOL @ 13,
Look up da Right shit, theres All kinda Sites dat give Different information
Plus you Aint From There so u Wouldnt Know anythin About it lol
u a Internet Gangsta & nothin more lol Not no Punchline King
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Post by Omega Bill »

SOLID diss.

Web filters at school, like Arv said, only 4 words but said A LOT about what you're getting across.

Thanks for the name drop, haha. I lawled @ the 6th sense line at it being hard to spell. Good shit.

Honestly, the whole thing was quoteable. I don't think there was a throw-away bar in the whole piece.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

-.HaZarD.- wrote:LOL @ 13,

u a Internet Gangsta & nothin more lol Not no Punchline King
Look who's talking.


@ Cee:

Was a dope verse. nice wordplay, punches were tight, multis were on point so was ur flow.
That run dmc shit was fuckin DOPE.

All in all a dope verse. thoroughly enjoyed it.
Nice work my man.
U really been steppin up lately.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by Haz »

lol Wait , cee Didnt Raiza just Come out With a Track Talkin About Guns etc

& u Said u Really couldnt Believe Him? LMFAO!!
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