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THINK I'M KRAZY

Post by Kurse »

Quick little track we threw together this week cause we got bored. We wanted to throw this chick that's never rapped in her life on the track to see if she sinks or swims. haha She only did part of the hook...but I gotta admit that for never doin it before...she did pretty well. She's gotta nice voice for tracks.

This is one of those tracks that a brutha says to a lady, "Look...we can get involved reguardless of the stories out there about ya...but if you fuck me over. Well...there just might be consequences. Ya never know!" So for my niggaz, we're introducing...

"THINK I'M KRAZY"

Feat. Kurse, HKX & Lady X

First & Third Verse: Kurse
2nd Verse & Hook: HKX
Hook: Lady X

Kurse, HKX & Lady X
Anger Manij'ment Entertainment Inc.
Written By: R. Bueno & R. Garcia
Produced By: Rapitfly
Recorded @ D-Lab 21 in Lombard, IL
All 3 artists appear courtesy of A.M.E. Inc.
All rights reserved. 2008

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i liked the hook it started the track off nice.. first verse was dope, nice flow and delivery, lyrics were on point, and yes lady x's voice is sexy on the hook too, nice change up, second verse, was dope nice flow and lyrics were tight, 3rd verse i liked the opener funny shit, i think the 3rd verse was the best on the track nice closer.

big ups to you my main man, shits dope man cant wait to hear more


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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

1st verse:wuz good no complains
2nd verse: it wuz good but,2 me it sounds like H just stopped suddenly then the chorus dropped in,almost as if he had more 2 say but didnt,or cudnt figure out how 2 end his verse
3rd:pretty solid,i think u cudda added more of a swag 2 ur flow but i aint hatin it wuz good
hook: wuz cool,nice combo

overall good track wuz feelin it mostly
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Post by Omega Bill »

Verse 1: I was feelin this verse, good flow, good lyrics, best verse out of the bunch.
Verse 2. I usually like HKX's verses, but I wasn't feeling it. Like Tram said, it sounded like he just stopped out of the blue and then there was the hook. Coulda added more to his verse.
Verse 3: Seems like there was more humor in this verse. Only thing I didn't like was you rhymed "Drunk" and "Stuff" kinda threw me off a little bit, lol. Wasn't bad though.
Hook: That girls voice sounds sexy, not gonna lie.

Good drop. When you drop the whole CD seems like it's gonna be fire so far.
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Post by Glamtrash »

The first verse was the most solid bit. Flow was good. I'm also in agreeance with the whole HKX coming out of no where thing.

Third verse was good, but it was missing....something. lol. Not that it didn't go with the rest of it, but imo it didn't have the same touch that the first verse did.

N that chick's aright.

All in all, good shit dude. I like most of the shit you put out there....Shit, even "My Bitch" grew on me after awhile lol. Keep doin ya thing.
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