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Meta-the-DEMON
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Post by Meta-the-DEMON »

Thanks man... I got a lot to do today as far as verses go so I may not drop that other script today but if anyone wants to see a mildly entertaining battle then here's a link to a quick one I did over at Soundclick earlier.. Not asking for votes or anything but you guys might get a chuckle out of it.

http://board.soundclick.com/viewtopic.php?t=261029

EDIT: I just had to edit this post 3 times..... I REALLY could use some sleep.. lol.
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Aim cannons at your ass-cheeks, I'm not BREATHIN' AN EMPTY OMEN//
You're a run-on sentence's presence... You'll *LEAVE WITH A SEMI-COLON*!!//

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WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

LOL the votes at Soundclick suck....
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Meta-the-DEMON
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Post by Meta-the-DEMON »

Yeah hahah I don't even count those votes.... I just battle there for light practice.
All-time battle record 93-5

Aim cannons at your ass-cheeks, I'm not BREATHIN' AN EMPTY OMEN//
You're a run-on sentence's presence... You'll *LEAVE WITH A SEMI-COLON*!!//

www.rapbb.com
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

like the punchlines, creativity, lil sloppy but i can read it fine.. multis were on point wordplay was nothin impressive but noticable enough, good shyt, nice to have another lyricist who's familiar with the elements of writing
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