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TGYH & Hazard-Who Want it(Part 2)

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yeah this was pretty dope. TGYH u got this style mastered but i thought ur verses were doper than normal. i dont know whether you really get down like this or not but u know what ur talkin about

Go Head And Try Ta Name What i Aint Done.. Who's Better? There Aint None
i'll Leave Ya Covered in White Like Ya Just Got Done Choppin An 8 Son

for example if u started talkin about shippin keys of coke it would be unrealstic but i like the way u put an 8th coz thats on some real shit. overall u had a dope couple of verses here.

the verse flowed real good, multis on point as usual. it was just lacking a bit of originality. somethin that hasnt been said before but otherwise i liked this a lot

Hazard. ur verses were real good too. TGYH had the better verse but u did a good job too. its good to see u switchin your style up. honestly u got a lot more to offer than wordplay. i know that gangsta style aint what ur about but u pulled it off pretty well. only smal criticism is i think u tried to mimic TGYH style a bit. Try and incorporate it into your own style and you`ll be good. and Haz I liked that shot u had at me. Its all good coz keeps this site active if u know what i mean.

anyway good job 8/10
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Was a dope collabo.
But TGYH outshined haz in this one,

Haz had better flow then usual, his stucture was very good.
Dope flow with TGYH, with dope punches.

Shit was dope all around

8.5/10

props mah dudes.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by Omega Bill »

Faves from Haz:

They fussin & bitchin about how nothin they gitttin
im sumthin while spittin & ain fillin cats like unstuffin sum Kittins

i Move Fasta On These Niggahz Den a Switch-Chump
Yall All Some "Magik TRICKZ" Get ya fuckin Witch Dumped!

Faves from TGYH:
i Stay Masked Up it's A Fact You Niggaz Can Get Wrapped Up
i Always Keep A Trojan On Tha Mic Cuz i'm Leavin A Track Fucked
i Keep Spittin Like Beatle Juice Faggots i'm Callin it Show Time
it's A Fact i Fucked Ya Bitch She Swallowed Tha Whole Nine
i Come Nice With A White Six She Keep Ridin Like Bike Strips
She On An Off Like A Light Switch i'm Like Jus Give Me Some Pipe Bitch

Good shit. Yall work well together, both had good flow, good punches, good multis, good all the way around. I dont think anyone outshined anyone. Haz does has, TGYH does TGYH. Both do well anyways and do better as a team. I liked the first one too, keep droppin in parts. Gets the people interested in whats bout to be comin up.
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Busy but Im getting at some feed today
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Ight Flow Was Solid On Both Ends...Length And Syllabels Was Straight As Well...Only Thing Is The Similes/Metas/Punches Could've Been Upped A Notch...For Both Sides, Felt Hazard Punch Was A Lil Harder..But TYGH came with a lil smoother flow an wording...
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No Doubt About It...Hit Up Cyphers
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