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Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:32 am

all i hear is faggots speakin, lyrically thanks to a few..rap is weakened, specifically.. no one to mention, cuz they're physically ONE dimention, weak as fuck..u niggas ain't a threat, put u at gun point and let the triggas paint ya death, famous yet? didn't think so cuz ur nobody even after ur dead, so i'll aim this pistol back at ya head, stuck on this forum like ya'll been plastered to threads, u ain't a rapper instead ur a stupid ass piece of shit bastard in bed, coffin closed, another lyricist who's no longer coughin flows, and i speak the truth as a warnin to caution foes, ya pitiful weak shit is noticed..and in the battles is where it most often shows, fuckers couldn't contemplate to concentrate, so i'll compensate ya soul to a common state, quake u till u quiver like a stomp with weight, u bitches just now wakin up.. how u spawn this late? i SINCERELY don't like the majority of u faggot ass cowards... call this honest hate

Meta-the-DEMON · Post by **Meta-the-DEMON** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:51 am

Pretty straight... You had basic multies and that's about it... Nice flow though. Real nice flow. Cool shit.

WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT · Sun Mar 09, 2008 4:26 am

^I agree..Structure threw me off a little but the flow was mos def. on point...Sometimes a little hard to connect tho.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:43 am

Lmao Wdf

Dis Shit Wus Weak .
The flow wus Aiight Dough
I Dont Like U Eitha U Fake Ass Niggah BRAT!

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sun Mar 09, 2008 6:26 pm

i liked it, i think i read the flow the way he'd want us to read it,
simple multis but they hit hard, its structure is decent considering
the rhyme scheme, but ur still a bitch ekoms. lol keep it comin

il give this a 7.8/10

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:53 am

THis bitch ekoms always says that all his shit is off the top lol

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 5:02 am

nah, not all of wat i do is off the top, recently just this and that topical against ghost(for the most part)

if i put more effort it'd have a better structure and rhymescheme.. but pretty much i was just typing away to a beat that was playing and when it finished then i finished lol.. so yea it was about 3-4 mins long to type this one out

n eways, appreciate the feed

thaphantom · Post by **thaphantom** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 11:56 am

nice shit..shoulda put it like line to line...woulda made it seem a lil better...after each line just hit the space bar...but it was straight i've seen better from you...but it was off the head..so i guess..it's koo

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