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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

heres a lil collabo viral and i did for fun,nuthin 2 serious just wanted'ta do a lil somethin so check it out

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6355876

Beat by:Eminem
Recorded by:Tramatik & Viral
Mixed by:Viral & mastered by DJ
also thanks 2 dj for clearin my vocals up a bit
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

tram you started off strong, then jus lost the flow like half way thru and jus never really picked back up, viral the beginnin was dope then it fell of for a second then picked right back up thought you kept strong thru out though
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Post by Haz »

Ya Flow Was Strait Fa da most Part Matik..
im Sayin U Coulda Put a Lil More Emotion Into Ur Verse
& Like sorta Raised da Pitch Ov ya Voice Fa Dis one. jus So its a Lil Different

Viral u Did Pretty Str8 Yaself 2... Ya Flow wus Good in da BEgginin
it Sorta Fell Off Den u Pickd it Up.. Lyrics From Both Were Str8

Overrall for a Quick Piece Put Togetha Dis Wus Str8..

Keep Doin Yall
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Post by Viral »

thanks for da feed yall..much appreciated


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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

haha i dunno tramatik sounds funny, but its koo haha, fell off a few times, but got back on it, so it was koo,

even with the vocal changes on ursas well it still sounded like u, u did it more eminem style which was kinda obvious to me since if i could compare u to n e one that'd be it haha,


good shit tho from both of u, think without the vocal effect it would've been better but that's just my opinion
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UPPIN FOR FEEDD!!!
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Post by Glamtrash »

It's cute. As previously stated, you both did fall off, Viral, you recovered relatively quickly. Vince, you needta work on your flow guy. But you're improving, just keep at it, you'll be aright.
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Post by HKX »

i heard dis one at viral's lol i think if ya'll re-recorded da shit it would sound better not bad tho lyrics were straight
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