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Right~!these cats act funny,i get more gatz pulled on me
then Ti. And Cash Money,Arabs Actually Are Dummies
Passing In Front A Me, With Gunz In The Hundreds
N Still Can't Surcum This, When They Enter My Circumference
More Carrots Then Bugs Bunny, No Clearance In My Area
The Appearance Of Terror like Ciara, Snitches Doing Short Stints
Confidence Is A True Error, Its Common Sense That Continents
Will Tear-Ya Home Defense, If You Live Intense(tents)
Spittin Immense Giving Events, The Country He Represents
Is Hesistant To Exit Then, Rap Presents Segments
Addressing With A Pen, Through Ancient Expression
An obsession with oppression,No Frangrance In A Session
Spittin Ageless Aggression,Like Monitors We're Refreshin
A Generation Of Questions, And We Will Not Quit Until
Every Confession Is Made, For Decades We've Payed
To Lay Being Betrayed, U Think WE Are Afraid
TO Mention Your Name, The Tensions The Same
With No Pension To Gain, Suspencing My Game
Dispencing ur Fame, My Lyrical Flame
Will Never Be Finished,I'll Make It In Guiness For
Breaking The Most Records, N Simply Win This In Seconds
This Is My Niche, You Tried To Make A Hit
But Missed The High Pitch!I'm a Mother Fucking hybrid
Came To Earth From Sky Ships,You Can't Fuck With My Shit!
I'm A Modern Day Tyrant, Aspiring With Iran
To Get My Lands Diamonds, You'll Die-Man I'm Flying
To The Hawian-Islands, Cuz I'm Taking A High-Stand
And Guess What SUPPLY-AN, The Demise Plan, Fire-An
Reviving The Great Japan, Apprising, The Grace Land
sensationalizing, The Lies In, Driving A Van disguise in,
A Tan, Thriving My Camp Soon We Will be suprising
Ur Fam, (boom) Whose The Champ?,I'm In The Mood to Jam
You knew I Movin Grams, Was The Dude That Had You
Losing Gramps, Stealing Ur Shoes-In-Pants, I'm Crazier
Then Abusing Lambs,With A Razor, While Viewing Cams of al qaeda
Complexity The True crusader,The question is who is greater
Nobody On My Radar, Even If They Came Far,Their Still A Un-named Star
When It Rains Hard,I get an Insane Charge,That Travels Thru Stained Bars
I maybe small, but my Brains Large,This Is Unfinished, the GAMES OURS
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Post by B-Bear »

Damn, u still doin your thang homez. kinda fell in love with u there..LOL..haha

didn't quite get the flow at the start, but i'm porbably the only one..haha

but ya ending was hot as hell homez!!
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Post by complexity »

Thanks for the feedback. I wrote this kinda quickly. Was just done to a beat, for a quick audio, for practice. So it starts out a little slow.
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Post by Buddha »

*beep* *beep* radar mode lol
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Nice work man
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Post by Viral »

i couldnt be on ur radar if i tried...i got dat built in scrambler BITCH!..ull never locate me!..lol


i liked the piece..pretty dope...for audio?...dont post it..record it and THEN post it..even send it to me wit seperate vocal track from da beat n ill mix it for u man...peace...and thats for ne one else who wants to take the offer
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Post by complexity »

It was juat a practice Viral. IF my motherfucking motherboard wouldn't have fried. I might have had something to show you by now. Now when I get back on regularly. I'm going to be to behind to work on audio. Maybe not though. If I take downtime working on it.

Thanks for the offer.

Talk to you later.

By the way: Thanks for the feedback people.
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