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Topical Fagness[keystyle]

Post by thaphantom »

These fags couldn't be on topic unless it was about a dick.
Honestly I got more talent in my hands i ain't talkin' bout how ya'll spit.
No pussy gettin' faggots always hatin' on me for what?
You ain't shit you faggots foreal just give up.
Illest has died, half of these rappers are bullshit.
Look at arv,bill,TGYH, all 3 of them prove it.
This is a keystyle don't forget my structure really doesn't count at all.
You'll still be too short even wit' some faggot ass high heals dog.
You want to call me out? Pussy's i'll be sure not to flake.
I've fallin' back? Wtf that must be a mistake.
Are you guys mad that i dissed on you or some shit?
You'd have to hear half my shit verbally you dumb bitch.
Foreal doe, it really don't matter about what i say.
When you'll read this you'll still be fags another day.
So shut the fuck up and keep on bein' homo wit' ur hate.
If rappin' was meant for me then fuck it let it be my fate.
So if you wondered why i wanted to do phone battles it's because yahoo mics don't work.
Yeah that bar is extra long but for all that it's really worth.
Can't understand my slang? Hit me up verbally.
'C' i'll 'murder' you cause yall never heard of me.
ThaPhantom Bitch Aka ThaTruth.
Ain't really shit yall can do.
Hate on my keystyle all you want i'll still be here.
Thaphantom's goin' no where bitch have no fear.
I ain't a underdog, and i'm far from bein' under yall.
I'll bing lightening and the thunder to yall.
If you wonder "Did he fall" Naw bitch it's just called individuality.
Topical Fagness, Look at the tournament and you'll see how i see.

[This was on topic , Topic of hating on all of yall]{oh yeah i'm bored leave some feed}
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Post by Cee4 »

this was ok. flow was a bit choppy and the multis could be improved. not bad if it was a keystyle but it was not good .


i think its time we battled. do you accept or are you scared?
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Post by Omega Bill »

Battle everyone you mentioned and you can only mention them again if you win. According to you, everyone you mentioned is shit anyways. You're apparently the top dog from what you say.

This was just like the last diss anyway, almost everything was forced, multis were alright at times, structure was choppy, I dont care if it was a freestyle or keystyle or not, mine are still structured when I drop key/freestyles.

I ain't a underdog, and i'm far from bein' under yall.


You're 0-4. Don't lie in your pieces.

Also, stop saying your bored. It's already obvious you're an attention whore. You're not bored, you've dissed the same 4 people everytime, won't battle any of us, call us shit, and then don't back it up. Just stop.
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Post by Arvincible »

i just gave up reading his shit. this is my last comment on a Phantom post.

Its pointless, shit talking and no backing it up...its not getting anywhere.
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Post by Typeo »

fuck it phantom, all these kids who think they can beat you, can battle me.

I'll own em, fuck your shit kids...ya'll don't know jack.

Kiss my white mother fuckin' ass cause I'm in bed with her right now, and you can come into her room and kiss hers cause shes ontop ridding the shit out of me.

TROOF, mother fuckers.
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Post by Typeo »

Emo? What now?

I've missed one battle and still I rebattled him and beat him. I've lost to people you wouldn't stand a candle against, and did damn well against them. What do you have? You battle these kids now who come in and think they can rap? Give me a break.

GTFO of here TGIF.
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Post by thaphantom »

Dude...I'm way better then yall claim me...yall feed offa hate...it's kinda a lame skill...but it got 50 cent a deal.....umm i'm 0-4 because i never really gave a fuck about battling...quit free posting bullshit...yall talk so much hate...but yall always say i ain't worth the read...well quit the read then damnit..
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