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Post by K.O. »

Life is Rhymth
if freedom is wisdom
where is tradition?
is it lost amongst christians?
they feed me and feed me like nutritions
my feet are weary and my heart sickens
my mind is lost and my throat thickens
I RUN AROUND WITH MY HEAD CUT OFF LIKE CHICKENS
TO BREATHE I NEED TO ASK PERMISSION
i'm on a permanent mission of fiction
scientifically i use force and recoil friction
fear is envy, greed is addiction
In the Devil's Kitchen.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

not bad, it seemed more like a rap then a poem to me but watever works homie, its definitely creative
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Post by Glamtrash »

I call this "wripping" It's what rappers do when they write poems, and what poets do when they try to rap. A sort of happy medium I suppose. Not bad though, i liked it.

fear is envy, greed is addiction
^^I love that line.
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