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Haz
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Post by Haz »

Cause youve been layin real low, like ya scared of a real fo'
But its the net, so, youll keep flappin ya gums while Im stabbin you son
You wouldnt be grabbin no gun, youd be whinin sayin "this shits for fun"
Homie you better run, cause a lot real cats will have you lyin on ya back
While you cryin to relax, n they tryin sit back, before ya get ya shit smacked
And lyrically slapped, talk is cheap even fromma kid whod get his shit jacked
Get wig ripped and his lid slipped away from his skull fromma blade that aint dull
A raid ya cant call, ya boys wont be there cause they high on midol, ya real tall
^^ This Section Wus Pretty Nice

Overrall u Overcame ya Writers Block
lol u Wu s Sendin Dis Shit To Me while Writin it
Keep Droppin Dont Stop u Bastard
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Cee4
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Post by Cee4 »

Ha ha this IS dope Bill. Its just pure agression. theres no real witty punchlines or quotables but its still probably your best diss yet and you`ve done a lot of disses lol.

my favourite bit was the same bit Hazard quoted
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Omega Bill
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Post by Omega Bill »

Haha thanks bud.

Appreciate all the feed.
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