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When Anger Strikes

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

originally i was going to use this for that collaboration .. but it doesn't go with the beat becuz i wrote it in silence...

posers wanna 'face me' like im 'new-to-the-game', been at it 5 yrs like i've grew-thru-the-"plain"/
a rap mentor, i'll school-u-the-shame, 'puzzle ur mind' and have the 'pieces glued-to-ya-brain'/
trapped-instigation so watch me crap-innovation , thugs 'spaced between their clothes' like 'gap-imitations'/
data strapped-into-'asians' like 'Jap'-information, but since when did 'Kung Lao' "RAP"-in-a-"NATION"/(refers to Neno)
a true 'soul asassin' cuz i'll 'kill-ya-spirit', not to mention i still-appear-with these thrilled-severe-spits/
don't stutter to spill-ya-queer-shit, if ya'll got skill-let's-hear-it, other wise dont fuck with ILLEST-LYRICS/
u can dickride till ur pregnant.. then brag-to-ya-kids, about how i slaughtered some pussy and tied their rag-to-ya-ribs,i'll stab-thru-ya-legs.../
drop ur footwork then watch u get dragged-thru-a-bridge to leave ya limbs as tracks-to-a-ditch...that's wat happens when u go from a fag-to-a-bitch/
i cast-the-slits right passed-ya-wrists where ashes-twists to leave niggers dried up like calluses/
stacked-with-lists, im ready~for~gore..now rap back-to-this cuz i bring a deadlier-war than an activist/
discarded-missles, now i spar-with-pistols made from shards-of-crystals to scar-ya-bliss-flow/
bringin hatred revenge and i'm far-from-pissed-yo, cuz any style similar to mine is artificial...
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That was a tight piece not as great as your others but dope 8.9/10
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Post by ky-ill »

decent I liked it 9/10
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turn back the hands-of-time one of the plans-of-mine and the need to scam-a-dime/
learn that ill leave sand-in-ya-spine
from the hour-glass your losing
power-fast the tower-crash as I scan-the-sign/
but like scarface Im still standing-fine/
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Post by Viral »

good shit...now wheres ur audios?
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lol... its coming
Last edited by Ambiguous Realm on Mon Sep 25, 2006 12:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Viral »

LOL i dont kno how da fuck it posted 3 times...weird shit..i removed em tho..lol
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lol yea that happened to me before cept i caught it before n e one else did
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Post by complexity »

yah this was nice, the last line was my favorite though. A nice little diss to the nation inbetween some innovative bars. Keep it up. 9/10
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

thanks for the feedback
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Post by MesaR »

yer it was good 9/10!!
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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