Unfinished ( But complete-freestyle)

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Me & Fame aka Chino aka Rock, are starting a crew..
we stay on top like having relations with Rosie O'donnel
its funny the only crew you'll be in is when ya working at Mcdonalds ||


you know what fame-means, its joining some lame-team ||
I got an insane-scheme, like chino xl going mainstream||
I'm a game-fiend, 'watch this chino excel' to attain-dreams ||
I drain-keys, its going straight to my head like a brain-freeze ||
I train-bees, rocks my traine, I guide-minors ||
its zany, we are the best tag-team besides-steiners ||
its rainy, we've started more streaks then eye-liners ||
its crazy, ill let rock run with it like wide-liners ||

me and rock began a journey, and this is the third-day ||
most of these fags turned-gay, just to earn-pay ||
I've got unnatural wordplay, ur opinion doesn't concern me ||
joining the latest tourny, I'm like Water you can't burn me ||
taking over the game sternly, as we form unstoppable rhymes ||
more lasers then an optical eye, squeeze enough to make tropical wines ||
its topical times now, like a storm taking ur lines down ||
this is my crown, I'm like a paranoid kid, yelling die clown ||

picture em blank, my styles richer then banks ||
my new crews on crank, they arm me (army) like a tank ||
we recruit too, but if you fuck up once we will boot you ||
drop ur ranks, that will suit you, a fucking shank ||
ducking skanks, I'm basically done with sluts ||
like rock climbers we will run up on ya ||
put ur guns up on ya, put the armor on ma ||
the names "unfinished" now thats real life Carma ||

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[MesaR]

lol....i thought it was good way way way way way way way way way way way way way way way way better then me freestyle lol

[B-Bear]

I truly admire ya skill wih em multis homez...!!!

Overall a nice freestyle...