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Haz
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My Flow's a Fiends Dream So much Feeling
No Touch "Feelin" So they Go Clutch "Meals in"
Hungry as The Countree, Chef Gettin Money
you Can Sample Lyrics & Test Gettin From Me
X Out the Best Cause The Rest Gettin Bum E
ur Meth's-Bad Haz Got the Purest Meth-ad ( Method)
HipHopPolice Arrest-Haz & Let Um Rest-Az
Product in a Eva-Tense-Tomb the Evadence Room
Dont House Me wid Garbage give um a CO-TENT-B
Half Cut Yayo Had The Title ( SO WENT HE)
Wid NO POTENTCY Haz Dey KNOW POTENT SEE..
Can Change So EASILY IN FORM dont gota jus be BREATHIN ME INFORM
Everybody And Anybody Dat u Kno Have Had RECENT LY SKIN TORN
i Hate Chems-Mayne & Stemz,Shame u Branchin offa Dem,Lamez
u Can say u Got balls But Ra-Mem-Brain Sumwhere in ya Mem-Brane
Before you grow to Be garbage And you and dem Lame Men-Same
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Like a Aids Infested Pussy Thee-Slayas-Raw
Try And Smoke Meth & Watch it De-caya-Jaw
Wen im dope itz Insert-me-Day the Worthy Way
Hope i Dont Hurt-ya-Pray i have u Bent like a invert-a-bray
You Perkasets Aint Work a Vet you Dumb Jerks a Get
a Worthliss Chec cus Dem Bullshit Lyrics Make fans Twerk a Sec
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Post by Arvincible »

good shit man.


Half Cut Yayo Had The Title ( SO WENT HE)
Wid NO POTENTCY Haz Dey KNOW POTENT SEE..
Can Change So EASILY IN FORM dont gota jus be BREATHIN ME INFORM
Everybody And Anybody Dat u Kno Have Had RECENT LY SKIN TORN


my favorite part right herre


its a pretty decent drop man, its much easier to follow than some of ur other drops.
imma give this an 8/10
u seem to be on point with ur writing recently,
im havin some kinda writers block or something right now
so im just writing alot to get the bullshit outta me ya digg?
keep it comin dawg
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Thanks Homie I Appreciate Da Feed..
Yeah Writers Block is a Bitch
Ima Leave u Feed Rite Now..

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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

i dont got ne favs with this piece but the structure wuz good,ur multis were pretty good and flow wuz good,keep droppin ur flow as of late iz gettin better,keep it up
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Your flow and structure deffo improvin.
I Enjoyed readin this piece alot .
And since ya structure was good it was easier to read.
Alotta that hazard wordplay, Really bringin some new shit to the gangsta drops on the site.

I'd give it 8.5/10
Keep up.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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