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"Splitting Hares" (A battle rap)

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"Splitting Hares" (A battle rap)

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Honestly your mediocre motives make no sense.
Why would you test the best when your best bet's
just to bet on the best
thats like orlando magic "rushing" just to tackle the jets
Im in a different ballpark boy get back on the bench
you think your rippin but the difference is I know how to vent
I take my heart and soul and push it through the tip of a pen
how many people really listen to the message you send
trade in your breaks for "servin steaks" and then I'll give you a "ten"
"tip" the scales weighing in
Im laying into aliens invading contemplating how to beat tortoises
but splitting hares is my speacialty
getting to the details with females
and pointing out your weakness see
it gets me off getting lost in your petty thoughts
your words are bread they crumble when my lyrics
turn the oven on
just handle me use your metal tongs
cuz if you touch my skin Im sinking in Im sicker than a lepers thong
Your...your no dealer but Im pleadin dog please know when your dealt
I'll leave you buried in a cemetary covered in weltz
your gonna win? na your just another knotch on my belt
It's like christmas for the blind the way my presence is felt

Its wickedly weird with some semblance of sense
spreading his venom in sentences which would explian why your tense
since
he was a bouncing baby he's been servin ya stress
and unless your standing right in front of him you needn't take offense ;)
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Post by complexity »

"Honestly your mediocre motives make no sense.
Why would you test the best when your best bet's
just to bet on the best "
thats like orlando magic "rushing" just to tackle the jets (weird closer)

Dope scheming man.

I don't know. I felt it kinda went down hill from there.

I liked your other piece better.

To fully appreciate this piece beyond a simple comprehension.

You have to realize the wordplay, he was using.

"Im laying into aliens invading contemplating how to beat tortoises
but splitting hares is my specialty."

It's interesting and something new to the scriptures.

So, keep dropping.
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