Complexity and Wild Bill - You'll Remember The Name

[Omega Bill]

Plex
Bill

Rhyming supremacy, even my mind is an enemy
I struggle to find an identity, so I can be intertwined in your memory
combined with my energy, when i spit fluid on tracks
freestyles I'd do it on wax, the fact is most music is trash
all I got left is screws in the dash, choosing my path
i can leave it all without bruise or a scratch
at first I was cruising real fast, now I park in a lane
it's dark in the rain, come out looking like a million bucks, sparking a flame
I left my mark in the game, my heart and the pain
i'm one of the only artist to claim, my life and art is the same
i won't let none of you disgrace me, my legacy was to hard to obtain
you'll remember every part of my name, are you insane?
I left emcees bard to death, becareful how you regard the best
and if you put your heart in the game, guard your chest
complexity beating your jugular vein since 04
devastating longer than the cold war, and you'll remember me when I'm no more

I look back at my prescense, and know I made in impression
It's like a blessin from heaven that kept me drivin and impressin
Believing I made an indentation to the nation knowing my name
Glowing with fame with no shame and I am one with the game
Some run from the same, but I embrace everything including race
No one ever stepped to my face, sat back and repped at their place
I know losing wasnt a case, when I started out I was just spoonin a taste
In the mouths.of who mis-placed, and underestimate me and mis-took
But when diss shook the foundation of the scrips, awe was comin offa lips
Shocking then floated off of this, and my verbal punches exploded into fists
Like shackles on your wrists, you cant begin to run from a flowing stream
Of all of the un-knowing screams, of all the un-showing gleams that I experienced
Sensed that I would make my mark, go down in the book, started as rook and blast
Dirty looks with my undeniable lyrical prescense, came to Illest n it was like lyrical presents
Went from peasants, to the top, better than the best, better than vets, who have lines same
Wild Bill engrained in your brain even if you tried to forget you'll always remember my name

[Arvincible]

dammmmn thats fire

very strong statements, good flow for both sides.
Wild bill didnt look so outflowed here. Really good stuff.


at first I was cruising real fast, now I park in a lane
it's dark in the rain, come out looking like a million bucks, sparking a flame
I left my mark in the game, my heart and the pain
i'm one of the only artist to claim, my life and art is the same

^^plex's best


Some run from the same, but I embrace everything including race
No one ever stepped to my face, sat back and repped at their place
I know losing wasnt a case, when I started out I was just spoonin a taste
In the mouths.of who mis-placed, and underestimate me and mis-took

^^bill's best

the only problem you had bill was the structure, which isnt much of a problem man. you did that whole
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thing lol but idk maybe it doesnt even matter here..

i really liked this piece, very motivating writing for me.
This is real sick, ive been losing my touch in writing too,
i havent seemed to improve much lately. But this is a good fresh piece to
rejuvenate my flow. Imma give this a 9/10 mang

[Haz]

Sensed that I would make my mark, go down in the book, started as rook and blast
Dirty looks with my undeniable lyrical prescene, came to Illest n it was like lyrical presents
Went from peasants, to the top, better than the best, better than vets, who have lines same
Wild Bill engrained in your brain even if you tried to forget you'll always remember my name

^ Bill u Finished Off Strong
your Verse Wusnt Bad ya Flow wus Jumpy but i Caught it Quick as Fuck
lol Good Shit Son , u Deffo Stayed Rite On Concept Cant Really Say Anythin bad bout ya verse

Plex you Came Widda Pretty nice Verse, u Definitley Had Multis In it
Stayed On Concept your Flow Wus Kool 2


I left my mark in the game, my heart and the pain
i'm one of the only artist to claim, my life and art is the same
i won't let none of you disgrace me, my legacy was to hard to obtain
you'll remember every part of my name, are you insane?
I left emcees bard to death, becareful how you regard the best
and if you put your heart in the game, guard your chest
complexity beating your jugular vein since 04
devastating longer than the cold war, and you'll remember me when I'm no more

Dat Wus Pretty ill^^

Anyways Guys i Enjoyed Dis Piece Alot
its Nice To See a Collab Widda Different Concept Den Mine Cee N Matikz New Shit..
Complexity u Owe My Pieces Feed i Always Feed Ur Personals & now Dis..

No Potency & ALL OUT..
O Yeah.. & Itz Nuthin..

[Haz]

Sensed that I would make my mark, go down in the book, started as rook and blast
Dirty looks with my undeniable lyrical prescene, came to Illest n it was like lyrical presents
Went from peasants, to the top, better than the best, better than vets, who have lines same
Wild Bill engrained in your brain even if you tried to forget you'll always remember my name

^ Bill u Finished Off Strong
your Verse Wusnt Bad ya Flow wus Jumpy but i Caught it Quick as Fuck
lol Good Shit Son , u Deffo Stayed Rite On Concept Cant Really Say Anythin bad bout ya verse

Plex you Came Widda Pretty nice Verse, u Definitley Had Multis In it
Stayed On Concept your Flow Wus Kool 2


I left my mark in the game, my heart and the pain
i'm one of the only artist to claim, my life and art is the same
i won't let none of you disgrace me, my legacy was to hard to obtain
you'll remember every part of my name, are you insane?
I left emcees bard to death, becareful how you regard the best
and if you put your heart in the game, guard your chest
complexity beating your jugular vein since 04
devastating longer than the cold war, and you'll remember me when I'm no more

Dat Wus Pretty ill^^

Anyways Guys i Enjoyed Dis Piece Alot
its Nice To See a Collab Widda Different Concept Den Mine Cee N Matikz New Shit..
Complexity u Owe My Pieces Feed i Always Feed Ur Personals & now Dis..

No Potency & ALL OUT..
O Yeah.. & Itz Nuthin..

[Typeo]

over all its pretty good, you have the problem I used to have Bill. You gotta control the length of your bars, looks like a stairway.

Plex had some damn good shit like usual, nice flow, best lines were the 'screws in the dash' and the final line.

You gotta be more cocky if you're going to write about how someone will remember your name Bill, its not bad, overall decent. Nothing really stuck out, the last line was the best out of all of it I think. Bring more strength to your wording and it might have some more stand out lines.

[-TraMaTiK-]

combined with my energy, when i spit fluid on tracks
freestyles I'd do it on wax, the fact is most music is trash
all I got left is screws in the dash, choosing my path
i can leave it all without bruise or a scratch
at first I was cruising real fast, now I park in a lane
it's dark in the rain, come out looking like a million bucks, sparking a flame
I left my mark in the game, my heart and the pain
i'm one of the only artist to claim, my life and art is the same
i won't let none of you disgrace me, my legacy was to hard to obtain
you'll remember every part of my name, are you insane?

good shit plex^

Some run from the same, but I embrace everything including race
No one ever stepped to my face, sat back and repped at their place
I know losing wasnt a case, when I started out I was just spoonin a taste
In the mouths.of who mis-placed, and underestimate me and mis-took
But when diss shook the foundation of the scrips, awe was comin offa lips
Shocking then floated off of this, and my verbal punches exploded into fists
Like shackles on your wrists, you cant begin to run from a flowing stream
Of all of the un-knowing screams, of all the un-showing gleams that I experienced

liked that from u bill^

overall wuz a decent collab guys,flow was good 4 plex, bill ur flow wuz ok cud use a little more work but ur gettin better,better then u were a bit ago so props on that,and yea as typeo said if u gotta be more cocky bill but for a lil collab it went a long str8, keep@it both of u

[Cee4]

Rhyming supremacy, even my mind is an enemy
I struggle to find an identity, so I can be intertwined in your memory
combined with my energy, when i spit fluid on tracks
freestyles I'd do it on wax, the fact is most music is trash
Flow is perfect. U make a good point by saying most music is trash

all I got left is screws in the dash, choosing my path
i can leave it all without bruise or a scratch
at first I was cruising real fast, now I park in a lane
it's dark in the rain, come out looking like a million bucks, sparking a flame
I left my mark in the game, my heart and the pain
i'm one of the only artist to claim, my life and art is the same
Excellent multis as usual. This section is simple but effective. Probably my favourite part of your verse

i won't let none of you disgrace me, my legacy was to hard to obtain
you'll remember every part of my name, are you insane?
I left emcees bard to death, becareful how you regard the best
and if you put your heart in the game, guard your chest
complexity beating your jugular vein since 04
devastating longer than the cold war, and you'll remember me when I'm no more
Loved this part as well.

The whole verse was good. Nothing to complicated but you still show your intelligence. Stayed on topic well 8.5/10

I look back at my prescense, and know I made in impression
It's like a blessin from heaven that kept me drivin and impressin
Believing I made an indentation to the nation knowing my name
Glowing with fame with no shame and I am one with the game
This is nice Bill. It sounds kinda Plex`ish in the writing style. Not saying thats a bad thing. Good stuff

Some run from the same, but I embrace everything including race
No one ever stepped to my face, sat back and repped at their place
I know losing wasnt a case, when I started out I was just spoonin a taste
In the mouths.of who mis-placed, and underestimate me and mis-took
But when diss shook the foundation of the scrips, awe was comin offa lips
Shocking then floated off of this, and my verbal punches exploded into fists
Again dope. Your flow has improved 100% since u joined the site

Like shackles on your wrists, you cant begin to run from a flowing stream
Of all of the un-knowing screams, of all the un-showing gleams that I experienced
Sensed that I would make my mark, go down in the book, started as rook and blast
Dirty looks with my undeniable lyrical prescense, came to Illest n it was like lyrical presents
Went from peasants, to the top, better than the best, better than vets, who have lines same
Haha. I like to see some confidence. I don't know about the first line in this section and the lyrical present punch but the rest was dope

Wild Bill engrained in your brain even if you tried to forget you'll always remember my name
Nice closer


Overall this verse is one of my favourite verse from you Bill. U held your own and stayed on topic well 8/10

[Omega Bill]

Aye thanks for all the detailed feed.

It's appreciated.

[Arvincible]

plex, i forgot to mention ur verse sounded alot like dre in "The Watcher"

[Glamtrash]

Rockin' guys. Bill, just keep in mind, it's way more fun to jump off a cliff than it is to run down the stairs. Lol, or something, i just woke up. But either way good fuckin job.