Street Flow

[Gutta]

Hook: Come around my block, betta keep the nine stashed, or die fast
cuz niggas round here be comin with four or five gats, darker then Slick Rick Eye Patch
So i know you dont wanna try that, Walkin on broken concrete, is the only time U Buy/By Crack!!!!
U aint gotta be fat to deal with weight, U fake dude, my story, only the real can relate to


Feds had the warrant to arrest, snitched on a nigga, now ya physical formz dormant, put to rest
Coke snorters wore the vest, when they rolled up to the restin, place, techs in place
Or the nickel plate could be your golden ticket up to Heavens gate
Accept ya fate, or become another nigga with a sturdy neck to break
We do it to the death, nigga reincarnation is the only fear my squad facin
My niggaz only eat through real rappers, now a days its starvation
Parlayin with dons, and fuckin pretty bitches, laungerie on her arms
Brunettes the appetizers, the entree is the blondes, haha
Street niggaz look up to drug dealers, they used to look up to the A team in the spot
From Ghetto to ghetto its all look the same, its like fuckin Bejing in the block*
They packin gunz now, soon its gonna be laser beamz on the block
where they fiend for the rock, next thing ya know ya moms buried
palms steady on the semi, like hell ya destiny, just Hope Gods ready
crack addictions got niggaz trapped, convicted with sick cats in prison
So listen to the truth and the lies i express in my rhymes
we neglected but why? nigga i guess we just acceptin the times


Hook:

*Bejing on the block, all look the same....Chinese people all look the same get it?


Look its your life, so live it how U wanna live it
U can sell records or dope, i dont care, but me I honor wisdom
As long as god forgivin, you can become rich, or lose ya heart in prison
See dawg Im livin like a nigga seekin to either be feared or loved
And in the long run, it wont matter once i get my spirit judged
We survived the hard times, where fearless thugs, spit them hard rhymes
and seeked peace, but all they got was poverty
and sentenced to a life where glock's slaughtering the trife
before the guilty conscience would strike
I just hope the holy water cleanses, the essence of my spirits is relentless
got my soul speakin, and you hear it through each sentence
I'm breachin the pearly gates, but on Earth niggas reachin for the early graves
as the attorney states, this man was meant to endure this fate
he had no chance to turn away, so he suffered i just hope he knows we love him
his mother, younger brothers and his older cousins
When you grow up thuggin, watch ya life drift towards a similar path
all I remembers ya laugh, couldnt make it past the winter
even though december went fast, thats why I'm prayin for u at Mass
And no matter how hard i try i just cant ignore you kid
I hope God forgive u for the life u was forced to live

hook


just writin i know these verses was way different but i was gettin deep

[Brah-Vo]

Shit was pretty dope.
Flow was hella nice
Topic was kool

OVERALL a Solid Drop
Beijing Line was funny lol.

7/10

[complexity]

Did I mention, you're the most underrated text emcee on Illest.

Dope shit, 9/10.

Enough said.

[Gutta]

thanks for the feed man i appreciate it alot

lookin for some mo feed

[Arvincible]

This is fuckin sick wit it.
Great flow, nice vocab and topic.
This is a great piece man take it to audio or something. Idk man thats all i can say.

Mad Props

[Gutta]

thanks son, i appreciate it mang

imma try ta hit up da audio once i get my studio set up in mah closet haha

[Prophet]

Dope, IMO the flow in the first bar was choppy, but the rest of ya bars flowed well. The topic was coo, I saw some nice Wordplay, and some good punches which I don't usually see in ur drops lol. But good job, I'd give it an 8/10

[Gutta]

ya it was a lil choppy thanks for pointing that out and thanks for the feed brutha

[Gutta]

upping

[Arvincible]

nigga feed back on illest is dead or vote in the tourney and in battlegrounds we need heads in there

[Gutta]

yaaaa son i feel u this site is been slow... if i got time ill check out yalls battles