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Post by Arvincible »

lol this was a quick type up, i can tell.

But it is all true though, its an angry statement!!

We have to do something about all this inactivity man...

Havent Seen Anything inna Minute But Racial And Gay Jokes
Bill's Steady On His Roids Always Chasin Away Folks

^^^^Thats gotta be you're best bar lol

You're flow was a bit off but u prove a point here and thats all that matters lol
i was thinkin of doing something like this but i guess u beat me to it.

BTW nice sig lol
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you can write ur topical verse thats due today
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Post by Haz »

AYOOO!!!
Lemme Hit U Up Widdah Hook Fa Dis Joint Son
its a Hook i Wus Gunna Lay down but illest Wusnt fully Dead
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Post by Glamtrash »

I thought I left feed on this before...my bad.


Nice concept, it could have been better had you put more time into it, but you know that.

How Bout Tha Battle Grounds? Lets Not Even Go There
People Ask For Votes Then Cry That You Dont Vote Fair

^^Fav bit.

I like the hook.

Arv, Not your best, but we discussed this.

Empty posts live cuz you know that we filled them,
and dudes came and left cuz we badly killed them,

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Fav bit.


All in all, it's entertaining, not the best I've read for any one of you, but that wasn't the point. Good job guys.
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Ayooo ThatGuy..
Lets Get a Collab Goin Rite Now Me n U..
How Nothin Can Stop Us From Wud we Do..
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

tgyh shined in this one his verse was on point wit the topic all the way thru, arvs verse was decent for what it was spose to be, the hook was tight, i think the 4 word multi kinda killed the flow for how short it was... but in an overall id say this was pretty straight.


Havent Seen Anything inna Minute But Racial And Gay Jokes
Bill's Steady On His Roids Always Chasin Away Folks
i Try To Look At Shit Daily And See Nothin But Excuses
Even When They Winnin They Cry While Tha Other One Loses

How Bout Tha Battle Grounds? Lets Not Even Go There
People Ask For Votes Then Cry That You Dont Vote Fair

those were ill bars homie
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Arvincible »

yeah thanks for the feed all of these verses were keep type ups lol
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Post by complexity »

Good write up dudes.

I liked the first bar a lot as well.

'How Bout Tha Battle Grounds? Lets Not Even Go There
People Ask For Votes Then Cry That You Dont Vote Fair "

I liked the hook and both verses.

"no serious writer really would be havin this
But i dont see anybody keepin ILL happenin,
like ThaGuy, Arv, Bill, and Hazard is, "

Good association with names.

I thought this was a good drop for what it is. A lot of good points raised.
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Post by Haz »

lol Thanks Guys
The Hook Wus Done By Me!!!

Uppin fa Feed
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Thanks for the feed
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Post by Brah-Vo »

dope shit.
TGYH was dope.
Hook was tight.
Arv was okay.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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i know i know man, i should've put more effort into this..
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Post by Cee4 »

This was alright. A nice couple of verses and it is mostly all true.

TGYH. nice verse, flow multis and most of what you said is true.

Arvincible.
verse was decent. like TGYH you had nice and flow and multis.

Empty posts live cuz you know that we filled them,
and dudes came and left cuz we badly killed them,
^^^^
yeah you nearly hit the nail on the head. u could say the reason why newbies dont stick around is because they get killed. i wouldnt really say they get killed in a battle but rather they get shit shit talked off the site. honestly theres nothing wrong with shit talking coz sometimes people got to be put in their place. but i dont like when you got an ATTN whoever threads and you got 3 or 4 people all ganging up sucking each others dick drawing pictures and shit lol. shits kinda weak in my opinion. especially when they spend hours every day doing it and some of the dudes are in their 20`s and their picking on a little kid. thats just my personal opinion. im not looking for trouble or trying to start beef but at the same time i dont really give a fuck what anyones reaction is to it.

fuck it though. illest is dead. its been like this before and got active again so i wouldnt worry
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Post by Cee4 »

^^^^
your right. i was just saying thats why i think illest is dead. thats why a lot of newbies dont stick around and why people who used to be active stop posting.
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Post by Arvincible »

Idk man i dont agree.
We have no choice but to do those things sometimes when we dont have anything else to do in this site.
I feel were still contributing to its activities and i dont really see any newbies trying to jump in there anyways.
Its not our fault that we find some sort of entertainment making fun of each other. And i dont remember shutting
down a rookie at all. If we didnt do the Fight Club or anything, Illest would be buried not just dead.
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