My Verse :
I Shit Out Verses Bars-i-Piss a Arsiniss
Ready To Set-Flamez On Vetz-Mayne
Thinkin u Can See Me Durin my Audi-Yo-Prime
i'll Call u Sed Thoughtz Cuz u Audi-Yo-Mine..
My Crewa Rappaz All-Killers-See
Packin Vocal Alltillery Deres No Way Yall-iller-B
We Steamin-Platez Of Those Seemin-Bait
Smokin Rappaz Attah Fienin-State
I Gotta Demin-Trait Lemme Demin-Strait
Come Crooked Till U Aint Leanin-Strait
My Doodz ..Moving Reefa Ova Hea
Gettin Dey Dough up like a Pizza in Da Air
You Gamblin ya Paper ina Lotto-Bin
When My Teamz Mottoz-Bin move Trees quicka Den Chicago-Winz
Im Eatin Dey Tryna Harm-Canibalz
So i Gotta Duck Pigz Like Farm-Animalz
Seein Everyone From Up Top Like E.T.
Sharp Shootin Rappaz Till Dey Runnin like G.T.'z in C.T
Spit Nuthin But Flamez Cause My Pockets Antsee Like BUGZ IN MY CHANGE
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-TraMaTiK-
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this wuz pretty cool,glad u doin a normal track 4 once bastard lol,that majik dude had a pretty good flow i think u had better lyrics n he had a lil better flow,how long or how many times did yall practice?juz wonderin,hook wuz nice tho had no probs with that,if yall do a track 2gether in the future,or even if u juz drop one by urself,try like..idk how 2 explain,really makin ppl feel ur words i kno u can do it u done it b4,but overall the track wuz cool keep droppin
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Arvincible
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imma get straight to the point, this was decent. Haz had some good lyrics and majik had some good hitters as well. The hook was okay, but i think it could have been better. it had the right lyrics but ur presentation of saying it together sounded kinda weird, it could be more catchy so ppl would blast that shit in their rides...
But other than those little things haz is really made for the audio, not for us to try and read his fuckin lyrics lol good shit man, imma give this a 7/10
the Pizza in the air line was sick by the way.
But other than those little things haz is really made for the audio, not for us to try and read his fuckin lyrics lol good shit man, imma give this a 7/10
the Pizza in the air line was sick by the way.
this was alrite. like your last track the beat was bangin
the first guy had the better flow and lyrics but hazard had some nice punchlines in their too.
the hook would of been better if just one of you had done it but it was still pretty catchy
Hazard could improve on delivery and stop trying to mimic Lil Wayne
the first guy had the better flow and lyrics but hazard had some nice punchlines in their too.
the hook would of been better if just one of you had done it but it was still pretty catchy
Hazard could improve on delivery and stop trying to mimic Lil Wayne
haha stop crying son.
its just your wordplay and metaphors are kinda Lil Wayne`ish
i aint the first to say that.
your flow kinda mimics him too imo
anyway when did i say i was gonna do audio?
ive said a couple times i was tempted to do some but i never said i would
in all honesty i think audio is too much effort what with the writing, recording and mixing and all that shit
for what? to get a couple peoples feedback.
i would only take audio seriously if i thought i could make a career out it but i already got a career which will make me more money than any net rapper.
but do your thing
its just your wordplay and metaphors are kinda Lil Wayne`ish
i aint the first to say that.
your flow kinda mimics him too imo
anyway when did i say i was gonna do audio?
ive said a couple times i was tempted to do some but i never said i would
in all honesty i think audio is too much effort what with the writing, recording and mixing and all that shit
for what? to get a couple peoples feedback.
i would only take audio seriously if i thought i could make a career out it but i already got a career which will make me more money than any net rapper.
but do your thing
-.HaZarD.- wrote:My Metaphors & Wordplay
Are Nothin Like Waynes u Dumbfuck
Hes 2 Simple
My Flow is Nooothin Like Lil Waynes Eitha
I Aint Seen Any1 Else Say it?!?!?!
Plus i Got TRACKZ out Homie
i Just Got Signed To a Indie Label
Niggahz Out Hea Feel My Shit & Bump it
So Fuck Wud a Text M-c Gotta Say ya Digg
haha man well you remind me of Lil Wayne.
and well done gettin signed. who u signed to? you got a myspace? why dont you put these tracks up that people are bumpin coz nobody would actually bump the tracks that you put up so far.
i mean theres a big difference between listening once to someones track and actually bumpin it in the ride or whatever.
right im gonna be reasonable with u here.
i dunno people might have it as their myspace song but do you honestly excpect anyone to believe people that random dudes on the street bump your trcks?
do you think they go "oh check it out i was on this site illestlyrics and this new Hazard track is bangin"
doubt it. do you think your tracks are that good?
i`ll be honest they are OK, better than a few people on here. you have good production and the occasional nice punchline. i said you could work on your flow. thats constructive criticism. theres no need to cry about it.
the Lil Wayne thing is my opinion. i stand by it.
and i dont understand why you wouldnt want anyone to know what label your signed to?
i dunno people might have it as their myspace song but do you honestly excpect anyone to believe people that random dudes on the street bump your trcks?
do you think they go "oh check it out i was on this site illestlyrics and this new Hazard track is bangin"
doubt it. do you think your tracks are that good?
i`ll be honest they are OK, better than a few people on here. you have good production and the occasional nice punchline. i said you could work on your flow. thats constructive criticism. theres no need to cry about it.
the Lil Wayne thing is my opinion. i stand by it.
and i dont understand why you wouldnt want anyone to know what label your signed to?
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K.O.
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you rap how most white guys dance. no rhythm.
it sounds like a speech. this is no hateration. this is the truth.
what label are you signed to? NONE.
the beat was too industy played out wack and that guy majik sounded 100 times better than you.
its either your lyrics or delivery that dont coincide with the beat. you just arent ridin it proper and or you need to put more emotion in your shit cuz its like when you try to its 1/10 of any sort of emotion. im just givin you feed so dont cry about it. i dont put that much effort or emotion into my shit. i get feed like that from people just deal wit shit. my honest opinion and stop droppin the N-word we know you're not black. that shit ruins hip-hop. and you aint hip-hop. you like some middleeasternconnecticutsuburbanwannabethug.
do something real with substance. and when you drop an audio, please dont put your wack lyrics in the forum its audio for a reason. im sure people are sick of reading your lyrics. ya gonna get murda'd on tha mic kidd......but you might as well keep tryin so do your thing. i aint gonna hate, i jus mite take ya shit talkin ass down.
peace
KO
it sounds like a speech. this is no hateration. this is the truth.
what label are you signed to? NONE.
the beat was too industy played out wack and that guy majik sounded 100 times better than you.
its either your lyrics or delivery that dont coincide with the beat. you just arent ridin it proper and or you need to put more emotion in your shit cuz its like when you try to its 1/10 of any sort of emotion. im just givin you feed so dont cry about it. i dont put that much effort or emotion into my shit. i get feed like that from people just deal wit shit. my honest opinion and stop droppin the N-word we know you're not black. that shit ruins hip-hop. and you aint hip-hop. you like some middleeasternconnecticutsuburbanwannabethug.
do something real with substance. and when you drop an audio, please dont put your wack lyrics in the forum its audio for a reason. im sure people are sick of reading your lyrics. ya gonna get murda'd on tha mic kidd......but you might as well keep tryin so do your thing. i aint gonna hate, i jus mite take ya shit talkin ass down.
peace
KO
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