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A Couple Of My Battle Verses Against Diff Emcees I Battled

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Vs. NewSince


Welcome To My World......


Watch Em Get Rip Quick..No Punches By Newsince...So Cant Believe That Im On His Hitlist/why?
Cause Jay Quick To Put A End To New Sen (New Sin) Like Christians Askin God For Forgiveness!!!//lol
This Guy Is The Sickest? Never..So Touch My Rhymes? And I'll Simply Burn His Wrist/
Cause Jay On Some Rude-Shit Quick To Rip New's-Scripts(news)…Like Angry Journalist!!!//lmao
The Pain Is Murderous…So Hypothetically You Don't Have What It Takes-To-Beat Me/
Abrase-Him-Easy ...And Put A End To New Shit Like A Scatologist Ageing Feces!!!//Whoa
I Bet He Saying Take-It-Easy..But Ima Lyrically Maim-This-Geek ..He's Sustained-To-Weak/
Cause After This Battle Jay Will Continue To Drop Sence(cents) Like Defective Change Machines!!!//damn
Should Slice Ya Brain And Spleen Cause That's What Im Destined To Do/
And Watch N.e body (anybody) Get Devoured..And Yes (Ne)wsince This Line Was Directed To You!!!//{wordplay}
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Vs. Revolution Pt.1


[align=center]This Guy Is A Wordplay King? LMAO…….

Dammit-You-Lost?….Im Ending Ya Career…I Guess This Man Don't UnderStand-Im-The-Boss/
This Man-Will-Get-Toss…I'll Damage-His-Jaw Until Theres No More Revolution Like The Planets-Where-Paused!!!//Lmao
Hand-Em-The-Loss…Jay Aint Gota Barbecue Feces To Leave Queer-Shit-Smoked/
Hear-His-Flow? ..You Can Tell Re Verse Aint Moving Shit Like His GearShift-Broke!!!//Damn
Fear-This-Hoe…Jay Punches Like Troubles In Life… It'll Leave You Wit Hard-Aches/whoa (hardaches and pain)
I'll Slice Up This Broads-Face…This Dude-Is-Dead-Weight Watch Me Prove-That-Rev-Fake….Like The Benny Hinn Fraud-Case!!!//LMFAO
This Bitch Is Frail And Hatin Time For Him To Go Down Cause Hell Is Waitin/
Its Obvious Jay Won…No W's For U…Cause Jay Quick To Toss Rev L's (revels) Like A Mardi Gras Celebration!!!///damn
Leave This Faggot-Vacant… Its Time For Decapitation…Put His Mug In The Ditch/
Who Fuckin With This?...Everyone Agrees Jay Won…So In This Battle Re Votes (revolts) Doesnt-Exist!!!///Whoa…(revolts- mean to disagree/refuse)
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Vs. The Phenom Pt. 2


[align=center]Lyrical Slaughter....


Step Out The Vicinity-Fast...Hes Equivalently-Ass..I Mean Hes Plain Out Lyrically-Trash/
His Lyrics Given-Me-Laughs.So Watch As Jay Drop PH In Acid Like Professors In Chemistry–Class!!!//lol
This Battle Your Giving-Me-Cash.. Or Get Injected With Abdominal Fluid..Yes The Chemicals-Rushin /
Leave You In A Concussion...Jay Will Stop Theph (Theft) Like Criminal Justice!!!//woah
Getting Bloody Like Menstrual-Subjects..Hes Overrating Hiself..Sals Hatin-The-Arrogance/
Making You Fear Again..Cause Jay Quick To Takedown TP(Tee Pee) Like Native Americans!!!//lol
Punches Will Make-Him-Mourn..Go For Shelter…You Cant Take-The-Storm/
Cause When It Comes To Phe (Fee)…Jay Get Rid Of Em Like Waiver Forms!!!//ouch
I Was Raised And Born By Shooters..An Ya Life Shows Nothin/
I Might Go Buckin…Put A End To Vast Like Plastic Surgeon Perfoming Liposuction!!!//chea
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Vs. Gully & Perspective


[align=center]Gully Gota Hold His Own Cause Perspect The Type To Just Stand There And Get Shitted On Similar To A Totem Pole/
And Me N Noose Holdin The Chrome That'll Simply Put A End To Gull Like Scientist Who Study Erosion Control!!!//
Send You Hoes To The Oath..So If Yall Claim You'll Win Then You Know Its Purgery/
Jay Don't Fuck Wit This Dude Watch Gall (Gull) Get Cut And Removed Like Laparoscopic Surgery!!!//(gall bladder surgery)
Murder Yall Verbally…My Verbs Urgently Bruised Tramps…Me N Noose Amp/
Cause We Quick To Break Gully Similar To Juveniles In Boot Camps!!!//
And For Ya Partner..He Need Take A Seat Man For I Put His Face In Cement/
Cause Jay Known For Wiping Out Spec Similar To Lasik Treatment!!!//
Leave Ya Body Strained And Weakened..Im Cannibalistic..So Ya Brain And Heart? I'll Eat Em/
Or If I Bring You To Noose….Watch Perspective Get Hung..Similar To An Art Museum!!!//
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Vs. Friday Da 13th A.k.A Ill


[align=center]Friday The 13th? Am I Supposed To Run Or Something…



I'll Ignite-the-Torch…This Aint The Hill Have Eyes But Jay'll Leave This Guy-Distort/ lol
Fridays Lines-are-Forced…So Watch As Jay Make Friday The 13th Come To An End Like Jason On Life-Support!!!///lmao
I'll Quickly Knife-Ya-Corps…This Guys-a-Dork…Don't Have To Look At His Headline To Know That Hes-Gay
He Changed His Name Because He'll Never Be Ill Cause Friday Always Have Weak-Days !!!//
Theres No Way This Emcee-Slays And He Definitely Wont Seize-Jay/
You Would Think Jay Was Selling Body Parts The Way I Chop Limbs And Throw Friday Into The E (east) Bay!!!///lmao (Self explanatory)
SQUAD UP On Top Aint No Way You Glidin With Us...YOUR NOT A HEAVYWIEGHT So Stop Trying To Fuss /Reat Talk
YOU SUCK So Watch Jay Get Rid Of Ill Like Tylenol-Plus!!!//lol

MURKED…

This last bar is just a waiste of time…


You Was Neva In The Runnings For Fame…Touching Me Mayne...Will Get Ya Lungs Stuck In Ya Brain…Im Done Wit This Lame/
Call Sal A Sprained Ankle Cause This Battle You Was Dumb For Runnin With Pain!!!///



Vs. Blazin



FireFighting Time....


Indeed Im The Siar...Shellz Leave Him Soaked…Watch As This Emcee Will Get Beat Wit A Dryer/
Leave And Retire…Or Jay Will Put A End To Blazin…Like Extinguishing Fires!!!//ouch
You Weak And Tired Rapper..Fuck This Clown He Cant Do Nothin Around Me/
Scream TIMBER!! Cause The Way Jay Drop Zin..You Would Think I Was Cuttin Down Trees!!!//woah
Dont Care Who The Fuck Is Around B…Lyrics Make You Bleed With Each Stab/
Land You Wit Each Jab...Cause Jay Quick To Stop Blazin Like Fiends In Rehab!!!//lmao
He Needs To Get Teached Rap…..Fuck Wit Me And A Tech You'll See/
Cut His Legs..And Have Azin(Asian) In The Ocean Beggin For Safety Like A Refugee!!!//lmao
Teks And The Slug..And The Rest Of The Bugs..Will Inject In Ya Mug In Seconds/
And If This Guy Is Really Blazin..He'll Get Charged With The Heat Like Possession Of Drugs And Weapons!!!//
Nigga Get The Steppin……
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Vs. JaeQ


CheckMate……


Because He Lightweight..Does Not Mean I Gota-Be-Fair The Shotty Leave Ya Body-Despair/
Everybody-Just-Stare..Watch Jay Break Jae's (Jays) Heart Like A Beyonce-Affair!!!//lol
Ima Savage-Bastard..Watch Drastic-As-Ya Back Get Shattered For Actin-Adverse/
Flip This Faggot Backwords..Cue (Q) Will Never Be On Point Like Dystracted-Actors!!!//lol
Listen My Crew'll Take Ya..Jae Will Get Worked On Like School-Paper/
Who's Greater? …Jay Quick To Break Cue (Q) Like Angry Pool Players!!!//damn
Cant Hang In My Shoes Player…If You Didn't Know Man Ya Finished/
Cause When It Comes To This Battle J's Horrible Tonight….Like Bad Field Goal Percentage!!!//ehh
You Cant Fill My Position...Good Thing We Texted It Out Because Real Life You Get Shanked-Up/
Hang Up….The Flag..Cause Jay Known For Putting J's Out The Market Like Nike Went Bankrupt!!!//done
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dude that was dope as fuck
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word...thanks for the feed...
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Post by Omega Bill »

You got some nice wordplay and some hard punches man.

Good too see more people coming here to increase the competition.

Stay up.
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Post by Gutta »

Shitz tite bruh, how old u is?
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Im 19...


Thanks For The Feed Guys...
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Dats straight u a few yurs olda den me, where u come from bruh?
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Site Called 6th Asylum
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Post by Prophet »

Nice ish bro, you had some nice multies, and good vocab. I saw alot of dope creative punches.
Keep dropping fam
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Thanks...will do...
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Post by complexity »

We have had a lot of emcees who come through and just drop a lot of bitten shit.

We catch them, etc.

I definitely see authenticity to them verses and it would be great for the battle emcees of Illest to have the opportunity to face you.

Hopefully, you stick around.

9.7/10 for battling
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Post by MesaR »

6th aslylum?, man i was lookin at dat site today, the board said it's disabled or sum shit
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Thanks for the feed...


Oh Sequence On That Site You Have To Register To View The Site...
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uppin for more feed...
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

..Damn ..
You Be Killin Niggas ..
I Can Tell You Finna Beast Niggas all Thru This Site ..
You One Of Tha Best I Done Seen Since I Been Back ..
Ohh and You Ripped News and Rev ..
Wordplay and Punches Was Deadly ..
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.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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