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Just For A Laugh

Thinking Your A Folk, Pose You Wouldnt, And Your Flows You Shouldnt
In The Street He Can Breath Easy But With That Nose Who Couldnt?
He's Getting Hit With The Back Stabs, Sick Of His Whack Raps
I Could Shove Spray Paint Up His Nostrils And Use Them For Fat Caps
No Ones Repping This Lame Fuck, The Same Speed As A Turtle That's Stuck
He's Stepping His Game Up, But Dissing Me Is To Big Of A Hurdle To Jump
Come On, We All Know TGYH Isnt A Emcee, But Ah Well Thanks For The Laugh Poser
He Cant Compete With This I'm A Flosta, Battling Me Well "Sunny Your Days Are Half Over"
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Post by - Mutual - »

okay it was a pretty good rap
i liked it but i happen to think TGYH is a pretty good emcee
just my opinion
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

your wack!
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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i Agree...
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Post by Mac »

Thinking Your A Folk, Pose You Wouldnt, And Your Flows You Shouldnt
In The Street He Can Breath Easy But With That Nose Who Couldnt?

Lmao
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lmao considering i wrote this quick, and it was just for a laugh.
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Post by Prophet »

This was decent, as TGYH stated some parts were forced. This was a pretty weak diss IMO but some lines were funny.

Thinking Your A Folk, Pose You Wouldnt, And Your Flows You Shouldnt
In The Street He Can Breath Easy But With That Nose Who Couldnt?

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LOL best bar in this whole piece
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Post by Omega Bill »

This wasn't bad man. Especially being you're saying it was kind of a lighter diss.

Good flow and some good punches.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

I actually Thought it Was a Koo Little Drop ..
I See You improved on ya Multis Tho ..
Tha First Bar Was Funny as Hell Tho ..
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Post by complexity »

"Thinking Your A Folk, Pose You Wouldnt, And Your Flows You Shouldnt
In The Street He Can Breath Easy But With That Nose Who Couldnt?"

That's a hilarious line.

The other bars were pretty good but didn't match the impact of that first one.
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Post by JayGunna »

yeh 1st bar had me rollin..u did pretty decent though...good job...
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Post by Cee4 »

this was decent too.
your first bar kinda outshined the rest of the verse coz it was dope

Thinking Your A Folk, Pose You Wouldnt, And Your Flows You Shouldnt
In The Street He Can Breath Easy But With That Nose Who Couldnt?

the rest was good too. a couple of forced bits but still decent
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