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Haz
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Post by Haz »

LMAO!!!!







"Hey Man i Just Learned A New Scooter Trick"
Kids A Joke Still Wishin That He Grew A Dick
it's Lookin Like All Of illest Viewed His Diss
Kinda Funny Not One Vet Approved Of it
They Laughin At Tha Kid What They Laughin At
Now i See it.. Picture This Kid Tryna Grab A Gat


RAW!!!

Nice Flow niggah..

LoL Sequence ur done
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MesaR
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Post by MesaR »

lol good

hazard this wasnt even serious lmao, yeah im done without trying lol, your pathetic.
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Prophet
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Post by Prophet »

The flow was on point through out this whole piece, I saw a lot humorous lines.

it's Lookin Like All Of illest Viewed His Diss
Kinda Funny Not One Vet Approved Of it

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Lol this was the best bar in this piece IMO good personal
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-MiiLz.

Post by -MiiLz. »

Lol

He Still Dont Kno What it's Like Ta Hit Puberty
Rippin Another Homo is Nothin New Ta Me
"Hey Man i Just Learned A New Scooter Trick"
Kids A Joke Still Wishin That He Grew A Dick
it's Lookin Like All Of illest Viewed His Diss
Kinda Funny Not One Vet Approved Of it

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He's Steady Robbin EkomS And DZK's Styles
Even if He Was Davis He Couldnt Play Miles



^^^^Your Verse Came Harder, And U Had A Nicer Flow.
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Omega Bill
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Post by Omega Bill »

Good shit. Hard verse, a lot harder than his, solid flow, and good punches.
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Post by complexity »

It was kinda funny, I still liked freeflos better.

I think, he put more work into his.

Keep it up though.
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|.R.SON.aLL.|
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

...I agree wit Plex ..
Both Yall Came Decent ..
It Wasn't Mindblowin ..
It Seem Like a Wild n Out Battle Cus They Both Was Funny as Shit ..Lol
So Props On That ..
You Got Better Too Tho ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..
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MiiLZ
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JayGunna
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Post by JayGunna »

Yeh this was pretty decent...the Approve line was nice...
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Post by Cee4 »

this was good for a quick drop.

the opener was the best

This Faggot Claims He's Taggin And Graphin
He Keeps Tellin Jokes But Nobodies Laughin

the whole pubert thing is kinda played but i still find it funny


it's Lookin Like All Of illest Viewed His Diss
Kinda Funny Not One Vet Approved Of it
They Laughin At Tha Kid What They Laughin At
Now i See it.. Picture This Kid Tryna Grab A Gat
He's Steady Robbin EkomS And DZK's Styles
Even if He Was Davis He Couldnt Play Miles
^^^^
a lot of humour here


flow and multis were straight too
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