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Post by Arvincible »

Guess who's back? Arvincible been missin like hair on ya sack, shut enough traps to stop a bear on its tracks, drop ya bare on ya back, I leave destruction anywhere I attack, I keep the sun shinin with the fire I bring, if rap had a finals I'd acquire a ring, im flyer than wings, if this was a battle you can die in a ring, u sprung on a bitch and u be buyin her things, im a rich killa like a michael meyers with bling, can't stop what u can't top cuz im insane, got this rap shit on lock like its designed with chains, ill rip u apart, give ya spinal pains as im blind with rage, every different ear listenin but the rhyme remains aligned the same as every line contains prime propane that's hotter than the finest flames, leave you twisted in a spiral sprain, like when a '9 is aimed, imma leave ya on the ground till u find ya brains, im typically lyrically out in space of reach, put you out of place so u can face defeat, swallow this music and you'll taste the streets, I don't ride shit, I embrace the beats, you come strapless like u just laced ya feet, u better train everyday just in case we meet. That's just how I roll with amazin feats, now with arv's return, im leavin niggas to starve n burn cuz your a bunch of harmless birds, talkin shit while I was gone but now its karma's turn...
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Post by Omega Bill »

Nice flow.
Consistent multis.
Fairly good punches, some didn't hit.
Structure was a run on paragraph, understandably cause it's from your phone though.

Good shit to drop since your absence this past week or so. Some multis seemed kind of empty but overall it was a solid drop, and it also seems like a freestyle. Might just be me.

Good stuff.
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Post by JayGunna »

pretty good...yeh structure was garb but since it was on ya phone then i can get by that...overall decent keystyle...
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Post by complexity »

Word man.

Ill keystyle.

"ut you out of place so u can face defeat, swallow this music and you'll taste the streets, I don't ride shit, I embrace the beats,"

though, I would have worded it slightly different.

Nice rhyme schemes.

Your style has changed a lot recently for the better.

Keep it up.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Ya Flow is ill Fam ..
Multies Was Mos Deffo Tha Best Part Of Tha Piece ..
Very in ya Face Style ..
Aggressive Lyrical approach ..
I Was Feelin That ..
Tha Openin You Was Killin it ..
Tha Endin Was Koo ..
I Liked Everythin Overall ..
Some Punches Were Nice ..
And Some Were Okay ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Dead Silence »

nice drop

the multies were sick. i see that u excel in that cat.
some wordplay didnt quiet make sence to me.
but overall this was a nice drop
keepin on doin ya thang
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