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Ruthless Actions Collab

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It's Ruthless-Action, Were Both Possed With This Abusive-Passion
Sick With Toothless-Bashings, A Lyrical Kill, Check My Elusive-Rapping
Dickrider Your Sore-In-The-But Seen Ya Diss, We Saw-That-Ya-Suck
Hazard's A Skinny Cunt, Who's Feeding His Ego Alot More-Then-His-Gut
these ruthless punches will smack-ya-shitless but i'd only attack-these-bitches
its only fair that Symbolical got a big ego to make up for His lack-of-inches
It's Murder Iv'e Stated-What-Happend Haz Grabs Balls Like Players In Madden
Hazard Anit Down To Earth The Skys The Limit Since He Realted-To-Adladin
No Debating Whos Sick Because Your Rapping-Is-Straight-Weak-Brother
Only Time Symbols Is Making Music Is Clapping-Brass-Against-Each-Other

Hazard And Symbolical Get Fucked You Pusssssy Little Bitches LOL

Domino:

With Ruthless-Actions u Can't Move-This-Faction, We Stay Bruising, Bashing ..||
u, So Look-And-Dash The Roof-is-Crashing On ur Useless-Rapping ..||
Stupid Foolish Trash ill School-a-Bastard, Try To Run im Moving-Faster ..||
Who's-The-Master? Clash With Me ill Leave u Bruised-And-Battered ..||
ill Abuse-a-Rapper, Smash Em Slash, Mash Till ur The Purest-Matter ..||
Rell is Back, But There's No Party, His Style's Always Obtuse-And-Backwards ..||
Keep His Scalp as a Prize Like Moose's-Antlers, a New Trophy For Domino ..||
Polish it With Saliva, The Only Time The 'Spit Shine's Off-His-Dome' ..||
Now Khaos-Came, And i Ain't Talkin Bout Jap Tunes When i Say That Jay-Rock's-Lame ..||*
i Got Punches Up My Sleeve Like a Fist, Writin Them All Would Take-All-Day ..||
No Respect From The New-Faces, ill Leave ur 'Tongues Tied' Like Shoelaces ..||
Spitting Bullets, i Leave illest With Tooth-Braces And Bruised-Faces ..||
Shit's Like Skipping Court Cases When im Spitting, There's No 'Con-Test' ..||
'Chances Are Low' Like Old Monopoly Games, And This Ain't Even Dom's-Best! ..||
When i Let Loose-And-Trash-Em, in a Ruthless-Fashion im The Zeus-Of-Rappin ..||
immune To Acute-Distractions, Hate's My Muse-And-Passion To Boost-The-Thrashing ..||

im Such a Cute-Assassin!

*His Msn Name Was Jay Rock.

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Post by Omega Bill »

Ooooo, nice on both ends right fellas.

Both had consistent flow and multis, both had some pretty good punches.

Makes me sad to see Dom drop and know he's just gonna back into his hole, lol.

Good stuff guys.
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice fellas
i liked da punches and muties ya bringin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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thanks for the feed troops
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Post by Viral »

i liked both....domino had more.....so it sorta helped him out shine a bit...i think sequences punches hit harder.....but domino had alotta multis....some of em...seemed to be thrown in randomly cuz it rhymed...lol which isnt neccesarily a bad thing...but both yall stay up...keep doin u
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Post by Glamtrash »

Good shit from both of you. Sequence, you're getting better, Not quite there yet but your young. Keep writing kid, your showing potential. Apeboy, you're getting worse. That's because you don't write enough. You should work on that. It was still good shit though.

Fav. bit from Sequence
these ruthless punches will smack-ya-shitless but i'd only attack-these-bitches
its only fair that Symbolical got a big ego to make up for His lack-of-inches


And Dom
No Respect From The New-Faces, ill Leave ur 'Tongues Tied' Like Shoelaces ..||
Spitting Bullets, i Leave illest With Tooth-Braces And Bruised-Faces ..||
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Post by Dead Silence »

damn its nice to see both of u drop i havnt checked u guys out in a while

the multis were sick and the word play and topic was amazing
good job u 2
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Post by MesaR »

thanks people

anymore feed? maybe hazard or symbol maybe
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Post by Haz »

To Be Honest your Garbage homie
i Seen Alotta Feed In Here Talkin Bout ya Punches is hard as Hell Etc.
How? lol you got Some Simple Shits.. Dom Ripd Da multi Scheme Apart n u
Suppose to B e Multi King? Sym Sed he Doesnt Wana Even Botha Replyin..
So Thats where i Stand Till u gimme s umthin To Strike BAck At Dats Actually Hard..
O Yeah u Flaked Are LAst Battle So Why Dont u Set One Up?
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Post by Subsist »

its a great piece. the multis were hot and the punches were good. both have a close style of writing .
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