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Post by precise »

yea, props on bein the first to do alphabetical sloughter solo, lol it never occurred to me to do that for some reason haha.

nice job, pretty nice rhymes in there, and good vocab, congrats, usually i dont fully read shit this long but it was interestin, i got a short attention span haha

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

sure it made sense.. as discursive as possible lol..it was alright.. although seeing as u made a good point with the beef i figure i'll make a point with being cocky since i believe i could do a better job at it.. although i wouldn't waste so much time throwing in a bunch of words.. i'll drop my style of an alphabetic verse....and yea subsist.. wat he did would sound crappy on audio.. which is y its in written rhymes u douche..overall 7/10 (becuz u took the time to waste mine lol)
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Da Guy this is a real A-Z
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

mad nice ghost..props even tho u were an asshole b4 ur still an asshole with respect noww! lmao...nice job i most likely cudnt do this on'a good day..but u never kno..props 4 doin ur thing..i understood most of the words n how u used em..kool shit..stay droppin
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx man its appreciated!!

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Post by Mac »

Shit Was Sick.

I Prolly Would Think It's Real Dope If Not A Million Rappers Did This Since Papoose..lol But Word Man It's Definate Fire. Keep Doin Ya Thing Man.
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~Symbolikull~ wrote:Da Guy this is a real A-Z
anyway youre welcome for the idea id agree wit the 7/10
think it was a little overkill mine was about 3 minutes worth of bein bored
but good job

appreciate all the fuckin feed on mine.....dicks!!
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This Is Old..Before More People Came On..lol..
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then youre not welcome for the idea..lol
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