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Child Violence feat Arvincible and Tramatik

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Arvincible: Green
Tramatik: orange

Back in the day, playin cards were what we did for fun
Now the new age comes and we seein Kids with guns

they dunno ne better whats there cause'ta rob?,
maybe attention but there trapped in the jaws of god


Lost in the influence of souls tempted with malice
Born to wreak havok, that shouldn't be their status

innocent eyes shoe no remorse behind shells
i gotta get it 4 my fam' iz how they remind themselves


I seen it on tv and in mags, children bleeding or in bags
Sittin in the streets in rags, starvin till their feet would drag

whos'ta blame?iz it there mind or fingers?
either way the drama creeps thru there spines n livers


Its A whole new world with different dealins,
is there a heaven for the weapons or these innocent killins

prolly wont ever find a way ta cure these kids,
what happened tho?they used'ta be pure n shit


Takin advantage of youths by raising them from the start
Now how do u have the heart to rip a child and love apart?

maybe its not there fault they watched it unfold,
the thugs the deals n the drugs dropped n sold


Murderers, raised to aim as trained killers for assasinations,
these heartaches cant cure from pain killer or medications

watchin them sit there n rub there thumbs at fate,
just barely scrapin ne crumb off their plate


Not just violence contests 'em, they got so more depression
They get politically abused by all the government oppression
What can we do? Its not too late to reach hand out for the youth,
The future is in their hearts, and we must stand up for the truth

Abusive beatins cause them 2 see the pearly gates,
Walkin all alone yeah its surely fate
situations like this are happenin everywhere,
but if we didnt exploit it wud u ever care?
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where's the love?


Uppin for feed good ppl
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice rhymes comin from Tramatik
Arv i think your rhymes were slighly better
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Dead Silence »

nice collab. both of you.

you flowed and rhymed offa each other good.
the topic was clear.

favorite bars:
I seen it on tv and in mags, children bleeding or in bags
Sittin in the streets in rags, starvin till their feet would drag


Takin advantage of youths by raising them from the start
Now how do u have the heart to rip a child and love apart?


Abusive beatins cause them 2 see the pearly gates,
Walkin all alone yeah its surely fate
situations like this are happenin everywhere,
but if we didnt exploit it wud u ever care?


good shit both of you
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