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thaphantom
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Post by thaphantom »

I'll minded, Still findin, Time to spit, even though i've been off a grip.
I've been grindin, I've been trying, To find a way through obstacles and shit.
Nothin' too deep, Just key'in a free, No back spaces either u like or dont like who cares if u feelin me.
Sloppy yes but who gives a 'freak' you're like 'a leak' all i hear is air when you speak.
Really you should step-a-side, Before you get left-to-die.
Or I could deck-your-eye, Leave you wit' a black ring around ya left-eye.

Ok done short oh well. posts what u want. reply if u want. just bored. peace
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Post by Omega Bill »

To be completely honest, you have gotten better in your absence. Some of your flow chops up here and there, only thing to really work on because vocabulary.

Keep droppin.
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Post by complexity »

"I'll minded, Still findin, Time to spit, even though i've been off a grip.
I've been grindin, I've been trying, To find a way through obstacles and shit. "

Pretty simple man, it's not HORRID for a freestyle, but you could do a little better.

It's still good to see you trying and dropping.
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