-Past Loves-HQ & Rell

[*.HarleQuin.*]

HQ:

like a camera there were so many smiles you took, it was like when i kicked you came back and pushed, like on
the 1st and 15th as a matter of fact, remember your dumbass never callin me back, our 2 year mark became a
fiasco cus the guest of honor was a no show, i guess honor is really what u lacked, but u had hella pride tho,
ill give you that, break ups are supposed to make new love harder to find and more sacred but us didn't do me any favors just made my search faster like boolean operators cus i wanted to get over you, had my body ready to quit, like *Vivian this coaster is makin me sick, had to get off like i was watchin a flick, had me thinkin life is a bitch, affecting current situations and shit, other guys cashing in on the debts that u bid, but no amount of reparations can fix what u did. they can switch them around but the pieces never will fit, most of the time they just give in i could say i don't miss you but that wouldn't be true, reality is just too much to take like figure 8s in
my mind your on a continuous loop, i miss all the affection,me and you making two but i always say im like
the sky, i only appear to be blue, im really every other color, dont dwell, cus i know ill find another. he wont
be the same or that much better than you, but he wont play the all games you used to. besides you've already won it, don't think nothin of it, claimin now im the girl you covet?, i should love it but really im not honored.
ive moved on and frankly i cant be bothered,love is what we called it, but it was only a seed fate fathered,
and never supported,such a catch u were, should have avoided cus only u were rewarded and still my heart lays distorted.

*Vivian Greene-emotional rollercoaster




Rell:

...I Remember it Was U That inspired These Great & Dope Rhymes ..
If I Needed U Here, it Would Take U No Time, Still I Pay U No Mind ..
Thought I Was a Pimp That Can Handle Chicks, Get tha Draws and Scramble Quick ..
Got Dealt Them Cards Had To Gamble Wit, I Had ya Heart, Dismantled it ..
I Couldn't Make Love, Juss War Tryna act Hard On Some Rambo Tips ..
Now Mah Heart is Damaged Bits,U Got a New Soldier On ya Frontline and Ran Wit it ..
I Was ya King, But I Still Let Mah Queen 'Reign Over Me' Like Adam Sandler Flicks ..
Damn i`m Sick ..Without U ..in Mah Heart Skeemin To Win U Ova Plots Mah Brain ..
There's Flocks Of Dames, But Every Relationship after U Failed cus it`s Not Tha Same ..
...i`m Sayin i`m Sorry For Leavin U, all Our Pics On Tha Wall i`ll Start Takin em Off ..
U Was Tha Only Girl That Tamed Me By Makin Me Soft, Makin Me Regret Eva Breakin it Off ..
I Wanted to Tell U How I Felt, it Was Like Fat People Droppin Pounds I Kept Waitin it Off ..
But Babe Now I Grew a BackBone ..Soon Comin Back Home ..
...I Couldn't Look at U When I Seen Them Tears Comin Down ya Eyes ..
It Was Them Same Tears I Seen U Cry a Thousand Times ..
So ...We Can Start Ova Now, ya Mine ..and I Won't Eva Let U Leave ..
Inspire Me to Drop This Verse in Less Than 20 Mins ..Like Mya and Jay U Bring Out Tha Best in Me ..
I Know i`m Very Private, But Since you Mah Other Half i`ll Give U Tha Rest Of Me ..
....Girl U Mah Destiny ..

[Arvincible]

Wooooooow


This is the best script I've read since god knows when...

Harle ur verse was incredible, I really felt u there, its such a tragedy u know?

I can't copy and paste on this fuckin phone but damn... I wanna quote a lot from ur verse..

Rell, this was fire straight through, I definitely had a similar past so I can sort of relate but u know that no love is ever the same as anyone elses. This was the most emotionally moving and strong hearted piece here in the scripts..

U guys made reminded me of my past and I can only imagine wat was going through my girl's mind when shit wnet wrong then, wow, I've always wanted to write about it but I could never find the right things to say...incredible though u two.

I give this piece a 9.3 outta 10 yo!!

Stay up

[*.HarleQuin.*]

feed is definitely appreciated arv

im not a frequent dropper so id like to get as much feed as possible please!!

[Haz]

ill give you that, break ups are supposed to make new love harder to find and more sacred but us didn't do me any favors just made my search faster like boolean operators cus i wanted to get over you, had my body ready to quit, like *Vivian this coaster is makin me sick, had to get off like i was watchin a flick, had me thinkin life is a bitch, affecting current situations and shit, other guys cashing in on the debts that u bid, but no amount of reparations can fix what u did. they can switch them around but the pieces never will fit, most of the time they just give in i could say i don't miss you but that wouldn't be true,

^ I Liked This Part From You The Most Harle.. i Didnt Like Your Structure But dat Doesnt Matter
Alot Of Emotion Put Into The Piece. Some Aight Punches Here & There. U Got your Message Across Well
Kill't The Concept On your Part.. LOL Yall DId Some Text Rappin "No Air" Type shit..


Rell.. I Felt Like U Had The iller Verse.. I Loved The Flow... Punches Were Kool..
Had Some Wordplay... Message WUs Delivered Nice.. Like How u & Harle Switchd Da Scripts As in a Real Relationship ( Yours). In The Sense of.. She Said How u Aint Pay her Attention & Like U Spit How u Didnt but Why Etc Etc. And Den Just GOt into The Whole I Love You Type Thang.. Dat Wus Kool..

Damn i`m Sick ..Without U ..in Mah Heart Skeemin To Win U Ova Plots Mah Brain ..
There's Flocks Of Dames, But Every Relationship after U Failed cus it`s Not Tha Same ..
...i`m Sayin i`m Sorry For Leavin U, all Our Pics On Tha Wall i`ll Start Takin em Off ..
U Was Tha Only Girl That Tamed Me By Makin Me Soft, Makin Me Regret Eva Breakin it Off ..
I Wanted to Tell U How I Felt, it Was Like Fat People Droppin Pounds I Kept Waitin it Off ..
But Babe Now I Grew a BackBone ..Soon Comin Back Home ..

^^ THat Shit Wus My Favorite Part Of ya Verse.. ill As Hell..

Yall Showed Alotta Love To Each Otha!! LOL Fuck Da "Past" Part..

Good Shit ...

9/10

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

GoodLookin Out to Mah Boy Arv & Haz ..
This Far One of Mah Favorite Collabos On illest ..
I appreciate Tha FB ..
I Know a lot Of People Finna Be Mad ..Lol
Big Ups to HQ ..
Had a Sick ass Verse Like I Said ..
& Yeah We appreciate Tha Feed ..

Uppin

[Haz]

Yeh Far From One of The Sickest Collabs
Why u Think People Gunna be Mad Cause U Did a Love Collab??
Who Cares Ur Versatile son

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

...Juss cus They Hate On Me and Her a lot ..
If We Do Shit Like This Together They`ll Be Like ..
"Ahh Wtf are They Doin" ..
Shit Like That ..

[complexity]

" guess honor is really what u lacked, but u had hella pride tho,
ill give you that,"

"reality is just too much to take like figure 8s in
my mind your on a continuous loop"

Nice verse Harle.

Rell, this was probably your most on point drop to date. Just because you kept on the topic perfectly but still incorporated a basically flawless wordplay filled verse.

"Thought I Was a Pimp That Can Handle Chicks, Get tha Draws and Scramble Quick ..
Got Dealt Them Cards Had To Gamble Wit, I Had ya Heart, Dismantled it .."

I didn't like the fat line. It didn't fit well in th piece.

"...I Couldn't Look at U When I Seen Them Tears Comin Down ya Eyes ..
It Was Them Same Tears I Seen U Cry a Thousand Times .. "

And the closer was ill.

I wish, Harle would have fixed up her structure a bit. It could have been a lot stronger of a verse.

Overall, I felt the topic you two. Although, it does stretch the imagination of some of us, who haven't been in the situation. So, you have to take that into consideration.

[B-Bear]

I think Rell nearly outshined Harl.. the best "love"-verse i've seen on IL ever.. !! I read it over and over again.. wordplay, flow.. I'd almost like to call it a perfect verse.. first time ever I've used those words to describe a written.. !

Harlequin, don't misunderstand me.. a SOLID drop, flowed good - crappy structure, sorta ruined a bit.. had to go over again and read over to get the point of some lines.. but still, descriptive - gave me the sense of lookin through ya eyes like a bystander to your feelings.. mad props.. but to top Rell on this one - it would've been outta this world..

SICK collab... I'm out.. ! haha

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

GoodLooks On Tha Feed y`all ..
I Really appreciate it ..
I Honestly Didn't Know Mah Verse Was That Good ..
But Thank U Real Talk

[*.HarleQuin.*]

i dont believe in structure in scripts or DC's but i see what ur saying
thanks for the feed

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

I Really Don't Either HQ ..
Thas Why I Streeeetch Sometimes