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Gotta Redeeme Myself

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I'm here to recatch my spitrit and redeeme it to
macs are strapped slap on a stack on da table then leave da room
leavin my tomb door wide open for more risin up gore
slidin up floors wit more blood and gore oh sure
it maybe a stated state a created fate
in which i was embarmed into when i was set up to inflate
retalliated hate shrouded my eyes could'nt see wot i could create
but i was dumb n i took da bait
got into a battle n lost i'll keep losin at a rapid rate
if i just dont elevate away from rookies
stop bets at da bookies well lookie lookie
i'l burn MC's down like Acid Hydroxide
cyclopentasiloxane maybe some chloride
killya quicker than a nine you walk out fine
you must be out your mind if i could back up and rewind
i would but i cant so i'll leave it all behind
a memory to just to me but Alpha's too
them battles was way to easy for you
the best man won well for know i'll get better,HOW?
i'll keep rappin attackin MC that step on my toes
where i'll end up nobody knows but i got tequla and 2 hoes
2 years hopefully i'm a legend and you'll be sayin off he goes
well lets hope so
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by MesaR »

learn some creativity
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Post by HKX »

yo dis shit ain't bad homie keep dat shit up
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Post by Arvincible »

thats better man, keep it up, u just need to work on ur flow man, some lines are much wordier than the other youre gettin better tho bruh.
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