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GOD's GIFT??

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now i'm here to discuss,this matter with us
i mean evrbody thinks that they god's gift but who truly is,
is a question i'm gonna explain wit this
only one verse to need to reverse that stank curse lets see who ranks first
plex i aint read nothin lately,HKX is gettin in late see in a while good is wot he gonna be
duc3 write some aiight shit through veterancy
you dont believe i wouldnt mention me
in my own rnymes and lines scheme let me get back to the theme
gods gift nothin but a dream arv buildin himself up real good it seems
that kurse is tryna join in wit us many would say its annoying enough
that dead silence goes from texts to audios
as alpha rodeos round our simple flows now so off we go now
Haz is just tryna maintain himself to he can reach his main aim
dead silence i got nothin to say
you and i need to elevate so i wont discriminate
rappers like kurse and rell right now in a state
its just a matter of hate a gate way to escape
are they jelous of each other i dont know i just carry my weight
if i fuck up i rennovate back to my original place
where i may not be a disgrace look in da mirror who do you face
now tell me is there god's gift
no its a fucked up concept thats harmless
nobodies armed with lyrical word for this matter cause its just absurd
spit at this verse give feed and be heard

i wrote this to a beat so i understand if ya dont get the flow
uppin feed
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by - Mutual - »

Well fuck this shit then
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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[font=Comic Sans MS]You're way past due for some feed from me.

I'll leave feed later on tonight for sure when I have some more time. [/font]
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Man ..
This Was Was Lame ..
And U Bit Tha Concept From Bill Who Bit it From HQ ..
Text Wise it Was Trash ..
And a Few Things I Wanna address
First I Don't Wanna Be a Gift to a Nigga I Don't Believe in ..
Second ..i`m Not Jealous Of Kurse ..
Third .. Juss Try audio cus Textin ain't Ya Thang ..
I`m Not Hatin But Quit Tha Simple Shit
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

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Post by MesaR »

ive said this before it's simple i agree with fiasco just up some creativity man you show alot of potential but it's to simple it's not fun for the reader to read, and that's whats its really about stay up bro, keep dropping
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by precise »

i didnt like it, n i think i know what beat it was writtin too i just cant remember the name, its an eminem song, shit if i remember the name of it ill be back

anyways it was incredibly basic, no punches, most of it didnt even make a whole lotta sense really, not hatin just tellin it like it is, better luck next time
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Post by - Mutual - »

thanks for tha feed
precise it's yellow brick road
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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