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Me and My Girlfriend

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My love affair, I remember when I first met her
Drunk in the club, but I could never forget her
My mate introduced her, she was white and petite
No love at first sight but I got swept right off my feet
She was into me but I wasn't feeling much at first
She took me to the dance floor, worked up such a thirst
Im fallin for her, im wide eyed and my hearts pumpin
Never felt like this before, alive, I wanna start jumpin
The night ended, I went home but I couldn't get to sleep
Lay awake, wondering when we would next get to meet..

Next day she was on my mind, she was all on me
I couldn't function, she got me feeling like a zombie
A weird feeling in my stomach, and a loss of appetite
Did the drink affect my memory, that happened right?
Im cold but sweating, I wanna meet her but not today
No phone, but my mate says she`ll see me on Saturday
Some people said she bad, and she's gonna play me
But she seemed so right, although she was kinda crazy
So we hooked up on Saturday, was just as I was hopin
Our relationship was sealed, damn Miss x got me floatin
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

man this was nice as fuck,nice emotion n wording,keep it up n peep 'hey cupid' in the chamber

A weird feeling in my stomach, and a loss of appetite
Did the drink affect my memory, that happened right?
Im cold and sweating, I wanna meet her but not today
No phone, but my mate says she`ll see me on Saturday
Some people said she bad, and she's gonna play me
But she seemed so right, although she was kinda crazy
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Post by - Mutual - »

Man deep shit stayed on point and i liked it

She was into me but I wasn't feeling much at first
She took me to the dance floor, worked up such a thirst
Im fallin for her, im wide eyed and my hearts pumpin
Never felt like this before, alive, I wanna start jumpin

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