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..if it Wasn`t For U

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..if it Wasn't For U I Wouldn't Be Where I Stand ..
..If it Wasn't For U I Wouldn't Be Who I Am ..
..if it Wasn't For U I Would Be Livin These Lies ..
..if it Wasn't For U I Would Be a Prisoner inside Mah Own Mind ..

U Helped Mode Tha Creation U See, Even if U Don't Agree U Still Related to Me ..
Pieced Together all These Different Makings Of Me, Stood Down When People Hatin On Me ..
U Would Never Soothe Mah Ego, While Everybody Was On a Stretch to Fill it ..
Rather Battle Text or Writtens, I Would Throw Fits Like i`m Tha K.West Of illest ..
..if it Wasn't For U, Mah Pride Woulda Got Tha Best Of Me ..
Put Me Somewhere Extra Deep ..Instead Of Stressin Me ..
U Simply Juss Let Me Free ..Showed Me How to Become Humble ..
Showed Me There Was More Than One King in Tha Jungle ..
Showed Me To Bow & Weave When I Needed to Rumble ..
..Everythin That Made Me into This Bad Guy That They Say I am ..
..I Took it and Flipped it into Everythin I Am ..
But Sure Enough U Was There, Came Back even after I Set U Free ..
Still Here For Me ..as if U Was Still Mine ..
As if We Had Matchin Names ..& We Still Rhymed ..
..if it Wasn't For U I Think I Woulda Be Slumped Over in Blood ..
..Never Breathin again, Numb and Colder Than Thugs ..
U Was There For Wateva I Need ..
When Reality Sits in, and I No Longer Live Out Tha Dreams ..
When Tha Weigh Of Tha Crushes Mah Mind and Shit ain't All That it Seems ..
I Wanna Thank U ..cus Without You ..
...Where Would I Be? ..

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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Arvincible »

Damn kid, shit was real deep yo, its so creative and the repetition wasn't redundant at all, it was poetic but hardcore flow ya gets?

The ego/k.west line was tight and so was the mode creation line.

I give it an 8.5/10 man

Good stuff bruh keep it comin.
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Post by Haz »

Damn..
Dis Shit Wus Deep!!!...
Loved How u Approachd it..
U Sent a Message 2 A Certain Some Good..
Flow Was on Fuckin Point..
Shit Was Creative Son..


U Simply Juss Let Me Free ..Showed Me How to Become Humble ..
Showed Me There Was More Than One King in Tha Jungle .. <-- Deep..


But Sure Enough U Was There, Came Back even after I Set U Free ..
Still Here For Me ..as if U Was Still Mine ..
As if We Had Matchin Names ..& We Still Rhymed ..
..if it Wasn't For U I Think I Woulda Be Slumped Over in Blood ..
..Never Breathin again, Numb and Colder Than Thugs ..

^^^^.. Shit Wus Nice.. "Numb And Colder Than Thugs".. WORD?!.. Dats Deep lol..

I Loved Dis Whooole Piece
Da Flow Wus On Point .. Emotion Wus Dere.. u Got ya Message Out..
u Jus wus On point.. i Like When u Switch Up ya Style but Still come ill ina Different Way

Big Upz ..
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

lol your welcome haha
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Post by 16 Micz »

yall just needa go back out or sdfu about each other.
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

who said that was about me stupid?
maybe i was being facetious,
u stfu you bitter bitch
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Micz!!!! ..
Wha`s Good Mah Bro-E!! ..
Lol Thas Mah Nigga yo ..
Still a Fuckin Dick Tho ..

GoodLookin Out Everybody On Tha Fb ..

Ayy Micz Peep Them Kurse Disses Son
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Post by 16 Micz »

*.HarleQuin.* wrote:who said that was about me stupid?
maybe i was being facetious,
u stfu you bitter bitch
im sorry, i know you so well that i should be able to tell when you're being facetious?
kill yourself.




and i already have rell.
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16 Micz wrote:
*.HarleQuin.* wrote:who said that was about me stupid?
maybe i was being facetious,
u stfu you bitter bitch
im sorry, i know you so well that i should be able to tell when you're being facetious?
kill yourself.
no the 'lol' and 'haha' at the end wasnt cue enough
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Post by ..DaGreatest.. »

sick shit bruh.. yu already know dude..
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Post by - Mutual - »

sick shit man deep concept and nice stuff
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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