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MagicMark
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skill, got a lot of it, with my will im unstoppable
killer punches, sick metas, and the multis on top of it..
see ya plays okay, but they'll hardly be needed
like hospitals and bandages in the garden of eden
im the hardest to heave em' n' a god to the heathens
im something sick to see, kinda like bart n' his penis (simpsons movie lol)
see my punches the best, they'd sell for a million each
in scriptures??.. shit, all im lookin' at is ass.. like a brazilian beach
....played, plays getting praise? Somethin' I'll stop
that'll happen like the number 13, "not on my watch"
thinkin' you better than me, can leave you set up to bleed
talkin shit, read my verses, n' im bettin' they leave
Im cool, insane, its plain I rule the game
cause my styles “pauinâ€
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wasnt bad better at the beggining then lost it at the end i liked the flow and vocab though

like hospitals and bandages in the garden of eden
im the hardest to heave em' n' a god to the heathens

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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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