A TRIBUTE CYPHER !!

[Bobby Star]

Its Coming From the HEART.. the Respect I Got for the Man TUPAC.. His Music Guided me Through HARD-TIMES Came out With RAW-LINES and compliCATED-RHYMES.. But We UNDERSTOOD Where You Coming From the HOOD.. So many People Felt the CONNECTION Still To This Day Show You AFFECTION Its All GOOD.. I Never Knew Your Words Could Bring People To TEARZ.. You Conquered All Your FEARZ.. And Still Had Some Good YEARZ!.. You Made It.. Your Music Is Heard All ACROSS-THE-WORLD.. You Managed To Spark The Brain To Bring CHANGE-ON-THIS-EARTH.. I Just Hope We have The TIME To REWIND.. Make Peace With ONE-ANOTHER.. Hopin One Day We Can Learn To APPRECIATE-EACH-OTHER.. You Know Were All In THIS-TOGETHER.. World Falls Apart WE-FALL-TOGETHER.. He Wanted Peace With Himself IT-WAS-A-MUST.. Its Just Amazing Thinking Back That One Day OUR-SAVIOR-WAS-ON-EARTH-WITH-US.. He Shared His Feelings HAPPY-AND-SAD.. Went Through the GOOD-AND-BAD.. But We All HAD-HIS-BACK Like He Was Family A YOUNGER-BROTHER He Could Describe His Feelings In Songs LIKE-NO-OTHER.. But Out There Was Where He SEEMED-TO-BE-EMPTY.. Had Money But His ENEMIES-SEEMED-TO-BE-PLENTY.. Still Cant BELIEVE Why He Could Have Been Hated ??? His PROPHECY.. He Saw Himself LEAVE But Wasnt Bothered By GREED.. He Knew One Way Or Another He Was MEANT-TO-LEAVE-UNWILLINGLY.. He Left With Shots To THE-CHEST But Still His Spirit Lives On And We Know He Was THE-BEST! He came down with OPEN ARMS.. wanted NO HARM.. but was ALARMED.. at this place we CALL HOME? No FATHER ALL ALONE.. left the world but look at what HE-HAS-DONE? tryed TO to bring PEACE but people looked at HIM-AS-A-STRANGER.. but i know it was THE-OPEN-ARMS-OF-AN-ANGEL!!

.... RIP LESANE PARISH CROOKS

[MesaR]

i like the idea and concept basically what you said was true, but what the hell was with the flow and structure and some of those multis you spat didnt connect/match up keep working on em, the realness was on point, could of been done alot better though, good decent drop for your first on here, stay active, keep dropping!,

[Bobby Star]

I did this ages ago ! like 3-4 months ! but i just wanted to get His Realness across !!

[- Mutual -]

aiight it was good but you need a better structure so it's easier fo people to read nice script fo ya first one
keep'em comin ya

[Gutta]

Tribute to the one and only....PAC...best to ever do it, will neva be replace...he like mah second father i lyked dis piece cuz i could easily relate to it

[precise]

decent story, simple rhymes, i noticed alot of sets of hyphenated words, was that to show multies or to emphasize parts? i dunno, overall id say uve got some potential,keep writin

[Cee4]

lol at Gutta sayin Pac`s his second father.


anyway this was OK. nice concept but i hate the structure but i know thats the normal way of structuring verses on some sites