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Two minute preview for Conspiracy.

Ayo,

I got burners and gats, on the corner servin' up crack,
on the block where kids get popped and purses get snatched !

My raps perfect infact, you can't handle the flow,
I'll embarass the fuck outta you when I battle you bro.

I don't mean to hurt your feelings, but YOU being LYRICAL, dude,-NOT-revealing.
I'll stay above this nigga his whole career like ROOFTOPS-and-cielings !

The kid is hot, just look at these hopeless dudes,
Couldn't overcome my sick style with Tylonol cold & flu.

Times up, over, SCHOOLED.



Could get way more personal, but I'll call them shots out later.

Hate on me.
I go off and throw-off-shots, it's like I'm writing rhymes on rolling papers the way I flow-off-top(s).
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Post by complexity »

First line was slick, not much of a diss

lol, third bars punchline was pretty hot.

Conspiracy better get his game up
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lmao at two minute preview
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

i hate u.. not becuz u said so but becuz i used that rooftops and ceilings punchline 3 years ago after it was already said to have been played out...so r u going to battle him or wat...
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Haha, you wouldn't understand that punch anyways,
you didn't see the conversation.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

i wouldn't understand the punch? or the personal?.. the punch is obvious so dont get ahead of urself
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Post by Crisis »

*Correction

You wouldn't understand the personal in that punch, you didn't see the convo.

Happy?
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Post by precise »

well then, enlighten us
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I SMELL O-W-N-A-G-E
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Post by drunken jesus »

this was alright, really simple though work on writing lines with depth and creativity

don't ever use a sick-flu/cold type line again, that shits been played out since like '94
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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