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Khan
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im back for a little so here a quick drop.

Post by Khan »

im not like most rappers cause i dont spit elements//(Fire, ice, Ect.)
but i drop rhymes that are as heavy as an elephant//
dont mean to be blunt but i like to keep it real//
like if you cracked open my skull, my thoughts would spill//
but its only your hesitation that got you killed//
understand the story and read between the lines//
and understand the difference betweens nickels and dimes//
ok.....i dont even know what the fuck im talking about//
bullshit just droppin out of my mouth//
im so fucking bored please put me down//
id rather be dead then listening to my fucking sound AHHHHHHHHH.


lol i dont know what happened, i hope you got a laugh out of it...i sure did -thumps up-.
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Post by Dead Silence »

lol good shit. pretty much random lol
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Post by - Mutual - »

yeah pretty good stuff but a little too short
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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